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Episode #161; OAD: 08/19/2013
Topic Started: Sep 24 2013, 08:50 AM (70 Views)
ebard
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Riverview
Episode #0161
OAD: 8/19/2013


(Scene 1: Francis Enterprises)
(Jessica enters Williams’ office)
William: This is a surprise I thought we weren’t speaking.
Jessica: I need to talk to you about your mother.
William: My mother?
Jessica: Yes, she’s getting involved with Mark Second.
William: Marie’s father?
(William gives Jessica a surprised look)
Jessica: Yes, they are going on a date.
(William’s jaw drops)

(Scene 2: Francis Mansion)
(Melanie arrives at the mansion and Jake is in the living room)
Jake: Did you get your stuff?
Melanie: Yeah, I had it all put in storage until I can go through it all.
Jake: How was your check up?
Melanie: Great, until I ran into your ex.
Jake: Ann? What’d she want?
Melanie: A double wedding.
Jake: A what?
Melanie: Her and Ron want to ride our wedding’s coat tails because they have no money.
Jake: What did you tell her?
Melanie: What do you think I told her? To go to hell.
(Melanie glares at Jake)

(Scene 3: Riverview Memorial Hospital)
Ann: What are you doing in Riverview?
Brad: I got a promotion. I’m now a court appointed Psychiatrist.
Ann: Congratulations.
Brad: The last time we talked you were rushing out of New York to track down William Francis to tell him that you were having his dead son’s baby.
Ann: Yeah, you’ve missed a couple of things.
Brad: So, where’s my niece or nephew?
Ann: Jake has her.
Brad: Jake? Jake’s dead.
Ann: No, Jake’s a son of a bitch, but he’s not dead.
(Brad gives Ann a confused look)

(Scene 4: Francis Enterprises)
William: My mother is dating again?
Jessica: Yes and with Mark Second.
William: Well she’s a grown up, she can fend for herself.
Jessica: Maybe you didn’t hear me, Mark Second. The same man that shot at our son.
William: It’s my understanding that Mark wanted Ron. Which I’m all for.
Jessica: You are sick.
(Jessica turns to leave the office)
William: I’ll see you at home sweetie.
(Jessica slams the door as she leaves)

(Scene 5: Francis Mansion)
(Melanie notices that Jake is staring off into the distance)
Melanie: Don’t tell me that you’re actually considering this?
Jake: Think about it. If Ann and Ron cant even afford their own wedding, then how are they going to provide for Charlene?
Melanie: My point exactly.
Jake: So, let them join us.
Melanie: What?!
Jake: The courts will see exactly how unfit they are if they are getting married alongside us.
(Melanie shakes her head and rolls her eyes as she storms off as Jake gives a surprised look)

(Scene 6: Riverview Memorial Hospital)
(Brad and Ann are sitting in the food court and Ann has filled Brad in on everything that’s happened between her and Jake)
Brad: So, you’re engaged to Ron Hampton now?
Ann: Yes, and we are trying to figure out how to get custody of Charlene.
Brad: That is going to be one hell of a custody battle.
Ann: You’re telling me.
Brad: Well, I’ll have your back the entire way.
Ann: I think that’ll help a lot to have a court appointed psychiatrist on my side.
Brad: Then I should probably work on my first case so that I can impress them.
Ann: What’s your first case?
Brad: Natalie Fields.
Ann: Oh, funny, Jake and I’s divorce attorney.
Brad: She’s batshit crazy.
(Ann chuckles)
Ann: I know, I’ve been to her house.
(Ann kisses Brad on the cheek and walks away as Brad heads back to his office)
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Terry
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Brad and Ann for the most part are pretty close as brother and sister, but I wonder what Ann really thinks about her brother not just being in town but that he is on Natalie's case, I am sure she must have an opinion about her brother helping Natalie out

And Jake does have a point but this could backfire on him

And William I can see him getting involved if and only if Mark hurts his mother Christine in some way
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Mylo
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I'm happy that Ann has someone on her side in town. Hopefully he can put Jake in his place.

Jake gave into this double wedding idea way to easy.

I wanted just a little bit more from the William/Jessica scenes.
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