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Episode #162; OAD: 08/20/2013
Topic Started: Sep 24 2013, 08:51 AM (86 Views)
ebard
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Riverview
Episode #0162
OAD: 8/20/2013


(Scene 1: Second Townhouse)
(There’s a knock on the door and Mark opens it and Jessica is standing outside)
Mark: Can I help you?
Jessica: Yes, I need to talk to you.
Mark: To me?
Jessica: You are Mark Second, correct?
Mark: Correct, and you are?
Jessica: Jessica Francis.
Mark: Another Francis? Wow. This town has no shortage of them.
Jessica: That’s right, but there’s one in particular that I want you to stay away from.
(Mark gives Jessica a surprised look)
Jessica: Christine.
(Mark smirks at Jessica)

(Scene 2: Francis Mansion)
(Jake enters the bedroom and Melanie’s on the bed)
Jake: Ok, talk to me, what was that all about?
Melanie: I just feel like you’re using me to get custody of Charlene.
Jake: That’s not true. I mean, it is but it isn’t.
Melanie: What the hell does that mean?
Jake: You knew that I proposed to you in order to have a wife by my side when I applied for custody of Charlene. That was never a secret.
Melanie: But I assumed that you actually wanted to be with me in the first place to propose!
(Melanie glares at a shocked Jake)

(Scene 3: Riverview Memorial Hospital)
(David is at the nurses station doing paperwork when Larry approaches him)
Larry: I need to talk to you.
David: Ok, what can I do for you?
Larry: I want to report one of your doctors.
(David gives Larry a confused look)
David: Which one?
Larry: Brad Diedrick.
David: The psychiatrist?
Larry: Yes.
David: He’s not an employee here.
Larry: What?! Then how the hell is he evaluating my daughter.
(David is taken back by Larry’s outburst)

(Scene 4: Second Townhouse)
Mark: Christine and I have simply exchanged phone numbers.
Jessica: Well, do me a favor and lose hers.
Mark: Why are you so scared of Christine and I getting to know each other?
Jessica: Jake is my son. You tried to shoot him, only you missed and hit your daughter.
Mark: That was an accident.
Jessica: Only half of it was.
Mark: So, do you think that if I get close to Christine that I’ll hurt your son?
Jessica: I just am not a fan of any Second.
Mark: It sounds like you’ve met my daughters.
Jessica: You could say that.
Mark: Obviously you’ve met Melanie since she’s engaged to your son, how do you know Marie?
Jessica: Wow, someone really needs to bring you up to speed.
Mark: Why’s that?
Jessica: Marie’s pregnant with my husband’s child.
Mark: Ok, I’m confused. Your husband?
Jessica: Marie tried to split us up, it didn’t work, but she did manage to get pregnant because of it.
Mark: Marie is pregnant with William Francis’ child?
(Mark gives Jessica an impressed look)
Jessica: If you’re thinking of blackmailing my husband for money, don’t worry your daughter’s got you covered. Stay away from Christine.
(Jessica storms out of the house as Mark smiles to himself)

(Scene 5: Francis Mansion)
Jake: Melanie, I do love you.
Melanie: Why don’t I feel like it then?
Jake: I don’t know, because I do.
Melanie: Why did you propose to me? Was it just to get custody of Charlene? Was it just to one up Ann and Ron?
Jake: No, I want you to be my wife. Those are all just added benefits.
Melanie: And you think doubling up with Ann and Ron is a good idea?
Jake: I think it’s a great idea.
Melanie: I really don’t want to have to tell Ann that I was wrong.
Jake: Don’t. I’ll handle Ann.
Melanie: Ok, I guess I’m sharing the stage with Ann and Ron.
(Jake kisses Melanie and leaves and Melanie rolls her eyes and throws herself back on the bed)

(Scene 6: Riverview Memorial Hospital)
Larry: I want an answer. Who the hell is this guy that is evaluating my daughter!?
David: He was appointed by the courts. He doesn’t work for the hospital, he works for the court system. Do the words ‘court appointed psychiatrist’ mean anything to you?
Larry: Then who do I talk to about getting him off my daughter’s case?
David: Larry, the courts. The hospital does nothing other than provide a office for him.
(As David and Larry are talking Brad walks past them towards his office)
Larry: I’ll just go to the source.
(Larry rushes off after Brad as David shakes his head and walks away)
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Terry
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This double wedding I see something happening as in something bad happening

But Larry today he just seemed too over the top trying to get Brad off Natalie's case but at the same time he's just scared that his secret is going to come out so I guess I can't really blame him

And Mark I can see him using his daughter Marie's situation to his advantage
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Mylo
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Larry is so worried about Brad. He's afraid that Brad will uncover something horrible.

Your building to this double wedding quite nicely. Nice Mel/Jake scenes.

I see Mark getting really close to Marie and the baby. He's going to use that baby to his financial advantage.
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