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Episode #164; OAD: 08/22/2013
Topic Started: Sep 24 2013, 08:53 AM (122 Views)
ebard
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Riverview
Episode #0164
OAD: 8/22/2013


(Scene 1: Riverside)
(Mark and Christine grab a table together)
Mark: Nice place.
Christine: Thanks, my son owns it, but I liked it even before I knew he was my son.
Mark: William owns this place?
Christine: No, my other son.
(Mark gives Christine a puzzled look when Ron arrives at their table)
Ron: Mother. What are you doing here with him?
(Mark and Ron glare at each other as Christine looks back and forth between the two)

(Scene 2: Francis Mansion)
(Jake arrives home and Melanie’s on the phone)
Melanie: Ok, I can’t wait to see you either. For sure, there will be plenty of time for us to hang out. Yeah, ok I’ll talk to you later.
(Melanie hangs up the phone)
Jake: Who was that?
Melanie: Amanda, she wanted to let me know that she just got the invitation for the wedding and was RSVPing.
Jake: You move fast.
Melanie: I’m not looking forward to this double wedding. I want it to happen, and then I want to have a real wedding with you as soon as we get full custody of Charlene.
(Jake smiles at Melanie)

(Scene 3: Riverview Memorial Hospital)
(Brad’s at his desk when David knocks on the door and enters the office)
Brad: Oh good, I thought you were going to be Larry Fields.
David: No, I’m glad he left though he cornered me before coming to you.
Brad: Yeah, he’s a piece of work.
David: Natalia never had much to say about him.
Brad: You treated Natalia, correct?
David: For a brief time. Larry had her transferred here when he came to town.
Brad: Were her medical records transferred with her?
David: No. Brian insisted that they not be brought with her. He stated that they were too sensitive and he wanted unbiased opinions on her treatment. So we treated her for what we saw while she was here in Riverview.
Brad: Which was?
David: Post Traumatic Stress Disorder.
Brad: PTSD?
David: That’s the symptoms she showed while here at Riverview Memorial.
Brad: What would have caused her PTSD?
David: I’m not 100% sure when this started.
Brad: Natalie said she was a teenager.
David: Then it wouldn’t have been Natalie that caused this.
Brad: It could have been when Nancy emerged from Natalie. Natalia could’ve been mourning her daughter. Can I see her file from when she was here?
David: Larry had it sealed. You have to get a court order to look into it.
(Brad gives David a look)
Brad: Did he tell you where he was transferring Natalia to?
David: Nope, he sealed the records and had her transferred privately.
Brad: What in the hell is he trying to hide?
David: Well Mr. Deidrick, I think that’s what the court wants you to find out.
(David leaves as Brad ponders how he’s going to get the information on Natalia)

(Scene 4: Riverside)
Christine: Do you two know each other?
(Ron glares at Mark)
Ron: You could say that.
Mark: Ron, I never knew that your mother was Christine Francis.
Ron: It was a relatively new development.
Christine: I knew the whole time, but it was best for Ron to be raised by Andrew Bard.
Ron: That’s arguable.
Christine: Ok, well Mark and I were having dinner together, is there anything I can do for you sweetie?
(Ron turns to Christine)
Ron: Sweetie?
Christine: Dear?
Ron: Enjoy your dinner, you two deserve each other.
(Ron walks away as Christine grimaces as she takes a drink of her wine)

(Scene 5: Francis Mansion)
Melanie: What are you smiling about?
Jake: I love you.
Melanie: I love you too.
Jake: I want Charlene to know how great you’ve been through all of this.
Melanie: I can’t wait to get to know her.
Jake: Just do me a favor.
Melanie: What’s that?
Jake: Don’t try to replace Ann.
Melanie: I wont. I don’t like Ann, but I understand that she’s Charlene’s mother. I’m just the step-mother.
(Jake smiles at pulls Melanie close to him)
Jake: And a hot one at that.
(Jake kisses Melanie and the two fall on top of each other on the couch as they make out)

(Scene 6: Riverview Police Station)
(Brad arrives at Natalie’s cell)
Natalie: Is it time for another session?
Brad: No, do you know where your mother was at before Riverview?
Natalie: Yeah, a hospital in New York.
Brad: Which one?
Natalie: All Saints.
(Brad smiles to himself)
Brad: Perfect.
Natalie: What? What’s going on?
Brad: Nothing, I just needed some help getting some more research on your family and I think you just gave it to me.
(Brad smiles and rushes out as Natalie is puzzled by Brad’s behavior)
Edited by ebard, Sep 26 2013, 06:02 AM.
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Terry
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Yes Melanie is going to become Charlene's step-mother and she will make a great step-mother but I wonder if soon Melanie is going to want her own child and if she does, is Jake ready to become a father again? But at the same time I do hope Jake and Melanie do get married but then again at the same time I really don't want them to get married because I am a Jake and Ann fan so

And Ron the sleazeball seeing his mother with Mark, I wonder if for once he will finally redeem himself

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Mylo
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Its Brad right?

Good Mark/Christine/Ron scenes!
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ebard
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Sorry, Imll go back and edit the epsilon. Originally his name was going to be Brian, but I thought Brad was better for the character. I missed this episode when I went back and edited!
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