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| Episode #173; OAD: 09/04/2013 | |
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| ebard | Oct 7 2013, 07:03 AM Post #1 |
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Riverview Episode #0173 OAD: 9/4/2013 (Scene 1: Clark’s Apartment) (Clark opens the door after someone knocks on it and Amanda enters the apartment) Clark: Amanda? What are you doing here? Amanda: I need to know where we stand before I leave. Clark: What are you talking about? Amanda: Is there ever going to be an us again? Clark: Amanda, I don’t, I don’t know. There are too many factors involved in that. Amanda: What factors? We love each other. Clark: Amanda. You murdered someone in order to keep my ex out of town. There are lots of factors involved in the future of our relationship. (Amanda rolls her eyes and shakes her head) (Scene 2: Riverview Memorial Hospital) (Madison’s at the nurses’ station when Brad approaches the stand) Madison: I had a good time at the wedding last week. Brad: Good, I had a good time as well. Madison: Maybe we could go on a bit more intimate date next time? Brad: How more intimate do you want then watching not one, but two couples get married? Madison: I don’t know, maybe dinner? (Brad smiles at Madison) Brad: I think it can be arranged. You have to do me a favor first. Madison: What’s that? Brad: I need your help in tracking someone down. (Madison gives Brad a confused look) (Scene 3: Ron’s Apartment) (Ron enters the apartment and Ann has paperwork all over the coffee table in the living room) Ron: What in the hell are you doing? Ann: This is all of the legal work that I need to consider with the custody battle. Ron: That’s like an entire library. Ann: I don’t have money for a lawyer, so we’re representing ourselves. Ron: Well, I’m pretty sure that Natalie isn’t going to be able to represent Jake and Melanie so that’s not horrible. Ann: Well I didn’t go to college Ron, this doesn’t come naturally to me. Ron: Ok, well it looks like you have your head on and are studying up. Ann: It’s tomorrow. The hearing is tomorrow. Ron: You’ll be fine. Ann: Aren’t you the least bit interested in this? Ron: It’s not my child. (Ann glares at Ron) (Scene 4: Clark’s Apartment) Amanda: You just want to push me out of your life, don’t you? Clark: I never said that. Amanda: You don’t have to, that’s all you’ve been doing. Clark: This is because I do love you Amanda. If you stay in town you will get found out. There’s no reason for you to just wait for that to happen. We have the perfect opportunity for you to get away with this and make sure that no one goes away for it. Natalie will get court ordered psychiatric help and then everyone will move on. Amanda: I think you and my brother have just been using this case to get me out of town so that you could push me out of your life. Clark: It hurts me that you think that. Amanda: Save it Clark, it’s obvious that you don’t care for me anymore. (Amanda leaves and Clark holds back tears as he closes the door) (Scene 5: Riverview Memorial Hospital) Madison: How could I help you find someone? Brad: Well, I need you to tell me where Natalia Fields was transferred to. Madison: Why would I know that? Brad: You work the night shift, you know everything. (Madison chuckles at Brad) Madison: Ok, you might be correct. Brad: So, where is she? (Madison writes down the hospital on a post it note and hands it to Brad) Brad: Ok, well that dinner date might have to wait a couple of days. Madison: I’m willing to wait as long as I get to hear the story behind all of this when it happens. (Brad rushes off and Madison returns to work) (Scene 6: Ron’s Apartment) Ann: Not your child. If it wasn’t for your revenge plot, we wouldn’t be in this situation. Ron: Well, I don’t want to do that anymore. Ann: You don’t want Charlene’s shares anymore? Ron: No. Ann: Then what the hell are we doing here? Ron: I don’t know anymore. Ann: This has to do with all of the time that you’ve been spending with my ex-mother in law, doesn’t it? Ron: Jessica has nothing to do with this. Ann: She talked you out of it, didn’t she? Ron: Jessica doesn’t even know that I ever planned to get my hands on Charlene’s shares of Francis Enterprises. Ann: Then what is your problem, because I know you and you wouldn’t just give up on making your brother pay like this. Ron: That’s the problem, you don’t know me! None of you Francis’ know anything about me! (Ann holds her hand up with her wedding band on) Ann: I’m not a Francis anymore. I’m a Hampton. (Ann grabs the book that she’s reading and goes into the other room) |
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| Terry | Oct 7 2013, 09:44 AM Post #2 |
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Ron may be turning a corner here for the better but just when I think he is about to turn a corner and become salvageable he always goes and does something to ruin that, so I am not taking this change seriously until he actually does something that proves to me that he definitely wants to turn his life around and become a better person What's funny is that now that Ann is married to Ron, Ann is now Jake's aunt-by-marriage and Ann is Christine's daughter-in-law and William & Jessica's sister-in-law but for how much longer though? That is the million dollar question now isn't it And Brad needing Madison's help in locating Nancy's mother Natalia, I wonder if Madison will be able to come through for Brad or if Larry will somehow find out what Brad and Madison are up to and have Natalia moved again to another sanitarium And Amanda being so selfish can't even see that Clark is doing this because he loves her and because she had to go and kill someone she is the one who ruined any chance of them having a real future but yet she can't even see that but I am glad that Clark sees the bigger picture because someone has too |
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| Mylo | Oct 14 2013, 03:44 PM Post #3 |
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I really like Ann/Ron's dynamic and this was an interesting turn in their relationship. Especially so soon after getting married. Looks like Jessica got to Ron... I'm just not sure how I feel about Brad and Madison. I think since they are so new, it's hard for me to invest in them this fast. And I also think it has to do with the fact that you've introduced a lot of new people at the same time. I just don't by their instant connection especially since we barely know them. I think Amanda and Clark need to take a break! |
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