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Episode #175; OAD: 09/06/2013
Topic Started: Oct 7 2013, 07:04 AM (101 Views)
ebard
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Riverview
Episode #0175
OAD: 9/6/2013


(Scene 1: The Recovery Room)
(Marie is decorating for Halloween when Mark enters the restaurant.)
Mark: A little early for Halloween, don’t you think?
Marie: It’s Autumn, not Halloween.
Mark: Pumpkins always reminded me of when you and your sister were little and went trick or treating.
(Marie touches her stomach)
Marie: Pretty soon there will be a new little girl for you to take trick or treating.
(Mark notes the ladder out)
Mark: Speaking of pregnancies, you should not be on any ladders.
Marie: It’s fine. I’m hanging banners, not cleaning windows. What are you doing here anyway? I figured you’d be at the custody hearing?
Mark: And sit on which side?
(Marie gives Mark a stern look)

(Scene 2: Unknown Hospital)
Larry: Brad Diedrick, I will have you arrested for trespassing if you don’t get out of this room immediately!
Brad: Why’s that Mr. Fields? So you can usher Natalia off to a new clinic. I’ll find her again, and again until I get the truth about your daughter out of her.
Larry: Get. Out.
Brad: Who’s Liam?
(Larry almost gets whiplash turning around to glare at Brad)
Larry: How do you know about Liam?!
Brad: Clark Leonard filled me in.
Larry: Clark Leonard is a no good, son of a bitch.
Brad: Maybe, but he’s more worried about Natalie than either of you two seem to be.
(Brad leaves and Larry watches him before he turns to Natalia)
Larry: What did you say to him?!
(Larry grabs Natalia tight)
Natalia: Nothing, I didn’t tell him anything.
Larry: You better not have, or I’ll make you pay!
(Larry leaves the room and slams the door as Natalia wipes away a tear)

(Scene 3: Riverview Municipal Courtroom)
(Erika sits at her bench as Melanie/Jake and Ron/Ann take a seat on their respective sides)
Erika: Good afternoon, we’re here today to discuss the custody of one Charlene Diedrick Francis, is that correct?
(There are nods among Jake, Melanie, Ron and Jake)
Erika: I read the dockets for both sides and I personally attended the double weddings of both couples, but I’m really confused about one thing.
(There are confused looks among Jake, Melanie, Ron and Jake)
Erika: Neither of you are legally married.
(Melanie and Jake give each other confused looks and Ann and Ron give each other confused looks)

(Scene 4: The Recovery Room)
Marie: You are supposed to be supporting your daughter Melanie.
Mark: I do, but I’m also dating Christine now.
(Marie makes a face)
Mark: She doesn’t want to have to choose sides between Ron and Jake.
Marie: Yeah, have I expressed how much I don’t like that you two are together?
Mark: You haven’t, but everyone else in Riverview has.
Marie: That’s because Christine is pretty much disliked widespread.
Mark: Well, I like her and we’re meeting up for lunch, so I have to go.
Marie: Well thanks for stopping by anyway even though you wont listen to my advice.
(Marie starts to climb the ladder)
Mark: I see you’re not taking my advice either.
(Mark leaves and Marie chuckles)
Marie: I’m only six months pregnant, I can climb a ladder.
(Marie misses a step on her way up and falls off the ladder, screaming on her way down)

(Scene 5: Riverview Police Station)
(Brad arrives at Natalie’s cell)
Brad: Natalie, I need to have you come to my office for more questions.
(Natalie turns around only Brad notices that it’s not Natalie, it’s a very different form of Natalie.)
Nancy: Sorry cutie, I’d love to have some private time with you in your office, but Natalie isn’t here right now, it’s Nancy.
(Brad’s jaw drops at his shock at how fast Natalie regressed)

(Scene 6: Riverview Municipal Court)
Jake: Your honor, there must be some sort of mess up. You were at the wedding, you saw that we are indeed married.
Erika: I saw that there was a ceremony performed, but Mr. Francis, the only people in this room that are legally married are you and Ms. Diedrick.
(Jake and Ann’s jaw drops as Ron and Melanie glare at their respective partners)
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Terry
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Wow what an interesting twist, Jake and Ann are still legally married to each other, I wonder how that is even possible? But I wonder what this will mean for Jake's marriage to Melanie? Or what this could mean for Ann's marriage to Ron? Either way I think it was a paperwork issue, it has to be

Mark is dating Christine now, that's interesting, Marie's father dating William's mother, and Marie not being a fan of her father's choice in women is understandable considering Marie is pregnant with Christine's granddaughter William's daughter and Marie and Christine don't get along

But I see that you are gearing up towards Halloween in Riverview

And Larry I have a feeling that he's abusive because of the way he was with Natalia just now after Brad left
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Mylo
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Good Cliffhangers!

I hope Marie and the baby are ok!

Brad/Nancy Is going to be good!

What?! Ann and Jake are still married! Interesting twist!
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