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| Episode #177; OAD: 09/10/2013 | |
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| ebard | Oct 8 2013, 09:09 AM Post #1 |
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Riverview Episode #0177 OAD: 9/10/2013 (Scene 1: Francis Mansion) (Melanie storms into the house and slams her purse on the table and Jake follows behind her, closing the door.) Melanie: That bitch! She did this on purpose! Jake: No, she didn’t. It was a clerical error. Melanie: Why are you defending her when she’s obviously trying to ruin us! Jake: Calm down, I know what happened. It’s just as much my fault as it is hers. (Melanie glares at Jake) (Scene 2: Ron’s Apartment) (Ann and Ron enter the apartment) Ann: I don’t really know what to say. Ron: I’m not mad about it. Ann: Excuse me? Ron: I never really wanted this. Ann: You’re kidding me right, you sure as hell wanted this. It was all your idea! (Ann throws her purse at Ron) Ann: You son of a bitch! (Ann glares at Ron) (Scene 3: Riverview Jail) Nancy: No, I’ve never giving birth before, what the hell kind of question is that? Brad: Natalie did a physical for us, there were surgical scars from a birth. Nancy: Did you ask her about them? Brad: Yes, she did not give birth either. Nancy: Someone is lying. Brad: Do you know something about Natalie? Nancy: No, I have no recollection of anything that happens when Natalie is in charge. Brad: Then why don’t we work on changing that? (Nancy gives Brad an uneasy look) (Scene 4: Francis Mansion) Melanie: How are you responsible for our not legal marriage? Jake: Ann got our divorce papers from Natalie around the same time I sent ours in from New York. Melanie: Why would Ann send the originals after you sent the ones we got in? Jake: She didn’t know that the New York ones were sent in. Melanie: How did she sign them? Jake: She didn’t. I forged them. Melanie: Damn it. (Melanie rubs her face in her hands) Jake: I know, I was just trying to get this process moving because it took us so long to get the divorce. Melanie: Well, I guess it’s a blessing. Now our wedding that I’m planning will be our real one. (Jake smiles at Melanie) Jake: Always the optimist! (Jake kisses Melanie) (Scene 5: Ron’s Apartment) Ann: For months I’ve been busting my ass to get this wedding together so that you can get your precious shares for your families company and now you tell me that you don’t want them anymore! Screw you! Ron: Not only do I not want the shares, I don’t want you. Get the hell out of my apartment. Ann: You can’t throw me out Ron! Ron: Why, we aren’t married anymore. Get your stuff and get the hell out of my apartment. I want you gone by the time I get back from work. (Ron leaves and Ann yells after him) Ann: Of course, go run to Jessica! (Ann throws a vase at the door and shatters it as she throws her head back out of frustration.) (Scene 6: Riverview Jail) Nancy: What? Are you talking about integration? Brad: That is usually the end result in cases like this. Nancy: How long does it take? Brad: Depends on individual cases, usually about a year. Nancy: How does it work? Brad: Hypnosis, lots of walks down memory lane. Nancy: I don’t know that I’m ready for that. Brad: Well, we wouldn’t start it until after the case is closed against you. Nancy: Where are we at with that? Brad: I have to send the judge my findings, but I’m pretty confident. Nancy: I’ll have to think about it. Brad: Ok, you do that. I’ll go talk to the judge about your case. (Brad leaves as Nancy contemplates integrating her personalities) |
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| Terry | Oct 8 2013, 03:12 PM Post #2 |
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It is about time the 2 personalities Nancy and Natalie are integrated and when she is integrated it will be interesting to see which personality she ends up being more like or if the personalities are fused together and she is a mixture of the 2 then that will just make her even more unpredictable but I believe integration is definitely best because with integration Nancy/Natalie whatever she is calling herself she can truly heal Glad Ron sent Ann packing, about damn time this slimeball, this scum finally came to his senses and I am glad that he is ending this farce of a marriage because Ron needs to turn a corner and the only way that can ever truly happen is if he gets rid of excess baggage which of course I mean Ann but I wonder where Ann will go from here And for Jake and Melanie maybe this time they can properly get married this time by themselves in a more formal ceremony but maybe next time around they should just go for a more private wedding |
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| Mylo | Oct 14 2013, 04:12 PM Post #3 |
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I feel bad for Ann. She's pretty much in this custody battle alone. I feel she's going to lose custody to Jake/Melanie. I hope this isn't the end for Ann/Ro. I like them together! Brad is on the case isn't he? Nancy obviously doesn't want something to come out. Wonder what she will decide. |
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