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CTH: 258: 10/2/13; Carlotta Tries to Throw Her Weight Around
Topic Started: Oct 13 2013, 05:07 AM (238 Views)
Ali
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CLOSE TO HOME EPISODE TWO HUNDRED FIFTY EIGHT
OAD: Wednesday October 2, 2013
Created by: Alicia Sorrentino
Written by: Alicia Sorrentino
Directed by: William Ludel
Rated: TV-14 DL


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Carlotta Tries to Throw Her Weight Around



SCENE ONE: WATERVIEW CAFÉ

Sonya looks at Tony who is at the counter. Trisha smiles at her mother.

TRISHA
You should go over there.

SONYA
What? You aren’t serious right? I have no reason to go over there and bother the man.

TRISHA
Mom you and Tony are friends, I really don’t think it would be bothering him just to go over and say hi.

SONYA
I don’t want to bother him, besides we haven’t talked in a few months.

TRISHA
All the reason for you to go over there. You know you want to so just do it.

Sonya takes a long deep breath. She grabs her phone and stands up from the table. She walks over to the bar and taps Tony on the back. Tony turns around and is surprised to see Sonya.

TONY
Sonya, what a surprise! I really didn’t expect to see you so soon.

SONYA
Well, I wasn’t expecting to see you at all. How long have you been back?

TONY
I just got back in last night. I was going to get around to trying to talking to you sometime today. You really saved me a trip.

SONYA
Well, I’m happy that I was able to save you time. How have you been?

TONY
Well, I’ve been better but I’m slowly to get my life back to the way it was before I lived in the woods, and before I got married to Carmen. I’m involved in a new business and I think that it’s something that I can be really good at.

SONYA
Really? What business venture are you involved in?

TONY
I now own a third of Hillary Zimmer’s bar.

Sonya glares at Tony.

SCENE TWO: ZIMMER APARTMENT

Hillary grabs her purse off the counter. She puts it on her shoulder and walks over to the door. She opens it to see Quinn standing there.

HILLARY
Oh well this should be fun. To what do I owe the pleasure Quinn?

QUINN
We need to talk.

HILLARY
Well then, why don’t you come on in?

Hillary backs away and let’s Quinn in.

QUINN
You have crossed the line Hillary.

HILLARY
How did I cross the line? I haven’t talked to you in hours. I couldn’t have done anything.

QUINN
Stop playing stupid, you know exactly what I’m talking about.

HILLARY
Oh, Tony? Why are you still so worried about your brother? He isn’t going to do anything to you.

QUINN
Clearly you don’t know my brother.

HILLARY
Tony will not do anything to you. I mean he wouldn’t have a reason to. I think you should be more worried about me than him.

Quinn gives Hillary a quizzical look.

SCENE THREE: HEENAN: GEORGE’S OFFICE

Sarah is sitting down in the chair across from George’s desk texting. The door opens when Carlotta walks in, Sarah is completely oblivious.

SARAH
Oh George, I wasn’t expecting you to solve that little crisis that fast.

CARLOTTA
I’m not George, but the better question is who in the hell are you?

Sarah turns around and looks at Carlotta.

SARAH
I’m Sarah Ashton, the new face of the Xclusive line.

Carlotta looks Sarah up and down. She smirks.

CARLOTTA
I don’t know who told you that but clearly they aren’t thinking straight. You are not the face of xclusive.

SARAH
I’m sorry to tell you, but I am. I was appointed by George.

CARLOTTA
Clearly George doesn’t know what he is doing, we can get a better model than you, no offense of course.

SARAH
Umm, none taken I guess. Look, George has seen my modeling portfolio first hand and really wanted me on the campaign so I’m sorry…

Carlotta cuts Sarah off.

CARLOTTA
Honey, this is my project I’m sorry to tell you that you are no longer needed.

Suddenly the door opens, Mercedes walks in.

MERCEDES
Umm, I’m sorry to tell you, but she is staying because I want her.

CARLOTTA
Oh and who in the hell are you?

MERCEDES
I’m Mercedes, the designer, who in the hell are you?

Carlotta’s expression turns into one of shock.

SCENE FOUR: GORDON BAY HOSPITAL: ROOM 343

Adam is standing in the room that Steve was murdered. He has his armed crossed and is looking around the room. He gets down on the ground and looks under the bed, he finds a single, gray hair.

SCENE FIVE: ZIMMER APARTMENT

QUINN
What, should I be worried about you?
HILLARY
I didn’t say that. You did. Look, I have some work to do and I don’t need you keeping me away from it, so unless you have a point…

QUINN
Hillary, I want to make a proposition.

HILLARY
What kind of proposition could you possibly have for me? Quinn, I don’t want a damn thing from you.

QUINN
I want to buy your shares.

HILLARY
Haven’t we been through this already? I told you I didn’t want to sell after Steve died, I’m not going to give you any stock.

QUINN
Look, I just wanted to make things right, I wanted to give Angelique some stock. I should have never taken hers in the first place.

HILLARY
Oh well if that’s the case give her yours. That means I don’t have to put up with you.

QUINN
Now that’s just mean.

HILLARY
Quinn, I can be a whole of a hell lot meaner. Look, I have something to do so please show yourself out.

QUINN
Fine, we can continue this conversation another time.

HILLARY
Great, I’m not looking forward to it.

Quinn leaves. Hillary smirks as the scene fades.

SCENE SIX: HEENAN: GEORGE’S OFFICE

CARLOTTA
Oh my god, you are the Mercedes Miller? I am so sorry I didn’t know….

MERCEDES
Oh so just because you didn’t know who I was you were going to be a total bitch? That’s not the way to especially to someone so potentially important.

CARLOTTA
I didn’t mean for it…

MERCEDES
Whatever. Sarah, I just wanted to introduce myself to you personally, I’m Mercy.

Sarah stands up and shakes Mercedes’ hand.

SARAH
It’s great to meet you, I’m a big fan of your line.

MERCEDES
Thank you, it means a lot coming from one of the most beautiful women that I’ve had a chance to work with.

SARAH
Thank you, I don’t deserve that coming from someone like you.

MERCEDES
You are beautiful, look, I want to thank you for wanting to be a part of this project. Even though certain people may have not wanted you involved, you are going to be an integral part of this project.

SARAH
Thank you, Look, I need to get out of here but why don’t I show you around Gordon Bay some day?

MERCEDES
Girl, that sounds like a plan.

SARAH
Great, I’ll get to see you around then. Have a great day.

Sarah starts to walk out then looks at Carlotta.

SARAH
Have a great day, whomever you are.

Sarah leaves.

MERCEDES
Speaking of that, who in the hell are you?

CARLOTTA
I’m Carlotta Santiago, the overseer of this project.

MERCEDES
Oh, well nice to meet you.

Mercedes leaves. Carlotta snarls.

SCENE SEVEN: WATERVIEW CAFÉ

SONYA
I never would have thought of you wanting to be a bar owner.

TONY
Well contracting is an option. I still can’t believe how well the boardwalk is hanging.

SONYA
You did an awesome job, look if you’re ever free, I’d love to catch up.

TONY
Well, you can always come to the bar, I think I could get you some free drinks.

SONYA
I don’t think me getting drinks is a good thing. I think you might actually like me when drinking.

TONY
Oh, well I think I really should find out.

SONYA
Then I guess I’ll be seeing you at the club sometime.

TONY
Definitely going to be looking forward to it.

Sonya and Tony have a long hug, the scene fades outside of the waterview when Hillary is walking around. She peeps through the window and sees Sonya and Tony hug. The scene fades.

SCENE EIGHT: GORDON BAY MEMORIAL HOSPITAL: ROOM 343

Adam is on the phone.

ADAM
Hey, how long have we had room 343 closed? Okay… so no one has been able to enter other than official personnel since the murder? Good, because I think that I might have just made a break in this case.

Adam hangs up the phone as the scene fades out.



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ebard
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As ridiculous as it is that Steve's hospital room has been shut down for months now, I'm intrigued by that story picking up steam again!

Loved Carlotta getting shut down by Sarah/Mercedes!

Good episode!
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Terry
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Adam has caught a break in Steve's murder...if he has then I wonder who the hair belongs to...the gray hair that Adam found at the crime scene? Well whoever's hair that is...they can just run it down to the lab and get it tested and then get the perp's DNA and then make a formal arrest but I think the hair is circumstantial evidence at best and that whoever's hair it is...I'm sure it was planted at the crime scene in order to set someone up but in any event this intrigues me as well

Carlotta getting shut down like that by Mercedes and by Sarah both, I admit I rather enjoyed that too

I wonder what Quinn is going to do now?
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Skye
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I agree with the majority that enjoyed Carlotta scenes with Mercedes and Sarah.

I'll keep reading to make sense of the rest of the storylines.
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