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Season1, Episode 2: Lines Crossed
Topic Started: Nov 11 2013, 07:23 AM (237 Views)
DavidJM1988
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VLi47prS0UA
Theme Song: Paradise (Coldplay)

South-Port

Guest Stars: Brant Daugherty as Greg Newman, Shiloh Fernandez as Dillon, Tyler Hoechlin as Ian, Grant Gustin as Mike, Alex Pettyfer as Charlie King, Madison Riley as Rachel, Brittany Curran as Kalee, Courtney Cox as Dr. Grace Fields, Gena Rowlands as Dr. Gina Fields, and Kelsey Chow as Meaghan.

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Scene 1: South-Port Community College

(Jessica, Mimi, and Cassie were at the locker grabbing their books)

Jessica: Didn't know my first year in College would be this bad, I broke my bag, fell on the floor. Oh boy, this will be an amazing day.

(Cassie laughed)

Cassie: Guys will think it's cute.

Jessica: Yeah Brad laughed at me.

(Cassie stopped laughing getting mad)

Cassie: I'm going to class, bye.

(Cassie slammed her locker door closed and walked off, Jessica looked at her funny)

Jessica: Did I say something?

Mimi: Ask our brother, Luke. Bradley as he was called in High School. Hurt us and Nicki as well.

Jessica: Oh my god, I'm so sorry...

(Jessica and Mimi headed in Mr. Kenett's class)

James: Well ladies, so glad to see you both in class.

Jessica: Thanks Mr. Kenett.

(Rachel looked at Jessica)

Rachel: Hey, I'm Rachel.

Jessica: Jessica Michaels, nice to meet you.

Rachel: You too.

(They smiled as Jessica turned to Luke)

Jessica: Question after school.

Luke: Ok....

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Scene 2: South-Port Hospital

(Christie walked in on her first day as a Doctor, Grace walks over to her)

Grace: You must be Christie?

Christie: Yes, how did you know?

Grace: Well first, we all know each other. Second, you look pretty new.

Christie: Yeah, I guess you got that one right. Nice to meet you.

Grace: Likewise, how do you like it in South-Port?

Christie: So far, so good.

(Tanya and Martin walk in)

Tanya: Dr. Grace, can you please help me?

Grace: Yeah, come to my office. Christie I'll get back to you.

Christie: Yeah, take your time Grace.

(Tanya, Martin, and Grace enter Grace's office)

Grace: What seems to be the issue?

Tanya: We're trying to have a baby.

(Grace cuffed her hands)

Grace: These things take time.

Martin: She was told that she was on the time of the month we were told that this was the time.... Well, now it's past that time now.

Tanya: What do we do Doc?

Grace: I'm afraid I don't know I could suggest adopting.

Tanya: I DON'T WANNA ADOPT!!

Martin: Baby please stop yelling, she's trying to help.

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Scene 3: South-Port Community College

(Jessica and Luke met up at a locker)

Luke: You needed me?

Jessica: What happened between you guys and Brad?

Luke: Brad Jansen is a loser he was dating Cassie for about 3 months and she fell for him, then he went for Mimi for about 2 months fed her some love BS, then traded them for Nicki back in High School he dropped out and nobody knew. We got into a huge fight, then the loser started to tell us he changed bunch of crap.

Jessica: Oh....

Luke: Wait, you're not thinking of hooking up with him right?

Jessica: Well, I don't know.... He seems nice.

Luke: He's a liar, no good for you Jessica. I would stay as far away from him as possible.

(Jessica looked at Luke walking away)

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Scene 5: South-Port Beach

(Mariah was waiting for someone)

Mariah: C'mon, I told you 1:30....

(A car pulled up beeping 3 times)

Mariah: finally....

(Someone hands Mariah a dimebag)

Mariah: Thank you so much.

(The Car and Mariah part ways)

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Scene 6: South-Port Hospital

(Tanya calmed down feeling bad about yelling at Grace)

Tanya: I'm sorry Dr. Grace...... We have been at this for Months and Months, then we stopped for the Honeymoon.

Martin: Please, we need answers.

Grace: My mother might help.....

(Grace got up and ran out to get Gina)

Tanya: I hope we get answers.

(Gina walked in)

Gina: You need help???

Martin: Yes.....

(Martin and Tanya look at her)

Tanya: Will you?

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Scene 7: Brad's house

(Jessica got to Brad's house and knocked on the door, Brad answered)

Brad: Jessica??

Jessica: We're going to talk right now.

Brad: Ok??? About??

Jessica: You cheated on Mimi and Cassie for Nicki?!

Brad: Luke told you didn't he?

Jessica: He told me to stay away from you!!

Brad: Look I'm a changed man.

(Jessica teared up)

Jessica: How am I supposed to believe this?

Brad: Guess you don't then. Look you told me you have a boyfriend at the party.

Jessica: Why did you quit school?

Brad: I'm not saying why I did... Goodbye....

Jessica: Goodbye.....

(Jessica walks out to her car getting in, Jessica starts crying)

(Song: Goodbye to you by Michelle Branch)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DtDpNTYBJfI

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Scene 8: The Sommers House/ South-Port Hotel

(Mariah walked in after getting high, Kyle is in the living room)

Mariah: Kyle where's mom and dad?

Kyle: Mom is in the kitchen, I don't know where dad is he said he was going to a pool hall for hours.

Mariah: Oh ok......

(The doorbell rang)

Kyle: I'll get it Mariah.

(Kyle opened the door to find Mike on the other side)

MIke: Hi Kyle...

Kyle: Mike! You can't be here, you gotta go.

Mike: No....

(Kyle looked at Mike as it faded to the Hotel Room)

Ian: This will be fun Ian.....

Candy: Baby.... I'm ready

(Ian kisses Candy)

Candy: You ready for a good time?

Ian: Yes.

(Ian kissed her as they went down on the bed)

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Scene 9: The Benton's

Song: Gym Class Heroes: 8th Period: It's OK, But Just This Once!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yemVfvWnqOk

(Luke was chilling with Ian, Dillon, and Greg)

Greg: You think it was good to cross a line with Brad?

Luke: Yeah. The guy is a joke, a loser.

Dillon: Ok...... But if he comes to kick your ass don't expect us to help.

Luke: Why?!

Ian: That's a dick move Luke.

(Brad drove to Luke's house getting out and pacing to him)

Brad: LUKE!!! WE ARE GONNA HAVE OURSELVES A DAMN TALK!!!!

Luke: Why?!

Brad: You crossed a line....

Luke: And so did you, pretty soon every girl in South-Port is going to beg the question, can I trust this guy? Or is he gonna sleep with another girl.

Brad: I'm outta here, stay out of my personal life.

Luke: And stay away from Jessica.

(Brad leaves)

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Scene 10: The Michaels house

(Jessica walked in from crying as Sean looked at her)

Sean: Broken heart?

Jessica: I don't know, I like Brad.

Sean: Well, I wouldn't get to comfy anyways I'm going to convince mom and dad to leave this stupid place, go back to the better days and stay that way.

Jessica: Sean, You need to knock this off.

Sean: You hated this more than I did!

Jessica: I know, till I realized I need to like this place because this is our permanent home.

Sean: Not for long Jess.

(Doorbell rings)

Jessica: Forget you Sean... I got it

(Jessica opened the door to find Charlie standing before)

Charlie: Jessica, I missed you.....

Jessica: Charlie.......

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Next Week:

Charlie: I came to be with you Jessica....

Jessica: This is.... Great news.

(Brad walked up)

Brad: Jessica.....

(Brad looks at Charlie as Charlie looks at him)

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(Josh grabs his police badge, looks at Greg and Nick)

Josh: So, Guess we will be seeing more of each other

Nick: Yes.... We will.

Greg: Three Musketeers....

(The men celebrate)

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(Mike kisses Kyle and play argues with him)

Mike: C'mon baby tell them.

Kyle: No....

Mike: Please.....

Kyle: I SAID NO!!!!

(Ian and Patricia rush into Kyle's room)

Ian/Patricia: Everything ok.

(Kyle and Mike look at them)
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ebard
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I think there might be too many characters and not enough screen time to develop the stories. It's only the second episode so I know you're still working on the plotting and juggling the characters and stories but there's just too much every episode here.
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DavidJM1988
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I needed to bring out a few secrets here and there and leave a cliffhanger, by the third episode I'll be juggling more back stories like Brad's story, his family if he has siblings and also needed to bring out the Mike/Kyle fiasco, needed to bridge the Brad/Jessica story by bringing in Charlie but next week I'll focus on the next week characters
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DavidJM1988
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Also I needed to bring out other characters Ian, Patricia, etc.
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SoapHW
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I am liking it. There are a lot of characters to get used to but hopefully we'll get to know them better.
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