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| Episode 63 | |
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| MasonRico | Nov 21 2013, 04:57 AM Post #1 |
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Created By: Andre Wanzer Jr. Written By: Andre Wanzer Jr. Directed By: Trashawn Randolph Airdate: October 3rd, 2013 ![]() Scene 1: Capitol Movement Studio Darrian is running down the street where she stops to see a dance studio. She decides to go in and see whats up. As she walks in and sees the dancers walking around. Huge studios, major equipment and a smoothie bar. Darrian falls in love and then walks into someone. Darrian apologizes and the person she bumps into is her brother. Darius is shocked to see his sister at the studio and wonder what she is doing there. Darrian begins to explain, but she gets stopped when a girl walks over to the two siblings. She walks to Darius and tells him that its time for his interview. Darrian wonders what interview and wonders if her brother is actually going to be working at this studio. Darius says yes, but his sister knows he cant dance. He says he wont be dancing, but will be doing personal training and maintenance. Darrian tells him how great it is for him to be working at the studio and that she can get registered for classes! Darius says no thanks and that seeing her at home is enough! However, the girl says he has to get through the interview with her to get the job! The two walk to the back and Darrian wishes her brother luck! Scene 2: Nancy's Home Nancy is making coffee for herself and she watches the news and more about the explosion. Nancy tries to call Vonny, however there is no answer and goes straight to voicemail. Nancy tells her to call back and she loves her then hangs up. Suddenly the doorbell rings. Nancy gets and constant doorbell ringing is going on. Nancy yells she is coming and gets her way down the stairs. She opens the door and Rita is standing at the door. Nancy wonders what her daughter is doing at the door and wonders why she is not at the courthouse. Rita tells her that they need to go now. nancy tells her that her job is more important than some surprise trip, especially everything going. Rita walks in the house and tells her to hurry and get ready to leave. Her job as District Attorney can wait because the incident on the screen is more important. Nancy wonders what she is talking about and what the incident has to do with either of them. Rita says the explosion was inflicted on Rick's yacht and he was on their with Vonny too. Nancy jumps up and her face gets pail. She is in shock and says they have to hurry! Rita sighs with relief and the two rush out of the door. Scene 3: Alexandria Pier Rick begins to mumble something. John tells the paramedics to back off listen to Rick. He then asks John where his wife is. John asks him the last time he saw his wife and he cant speak but points to the water. John looks with remorse and tells the officers to go get the diving team to hurry because a woman is somewhere in the water. They head out and get to it ASAP. John walks away to get Jacob, but Rick grabs his arm. He looks at him with worry, confusion, and anger. He says "Where is she?" John tells him that were gonna get her not to worry. Rick says to promise him and John says he will find her. Rick is pulled into the ambulance to get ready for departure. As John walks down the pier the camera shifts to a hooded man. He pulls out a gun and points. John turns around to see a gun being pointed at him and the man shoots. Scene 4: Washington Yacht Aidan begins to walk deeper down the yacht and suddenly smells something terrible. Aidan then goes deeper and finds some thing very disturbing. He sees a body burned to corruption by the explosion. He begins to yell for the officers to get ready because he has found a body. The officers walk over and see the charred body. Aidan calls Jacob on his phone and tells him that he has found a body deep in the caverns of the yacht. Aidan hangs up and sighs. Scene 5: Capitol Movement Studio Darius and the girl are talking at the table. She asks what experience he has with people and training them in fitness. Darius explains that he was an assistant coach for high schoolers after he graduated from Alexandria University. He began learning anatomy and personal fitness to help people get healthier and stronger. She then asks why he should have this job. Darius tells her that he deserves it because he is hard working, loves to help others, and he just REALLY needs a job. He especially needs to feed two mouths. The girl begins to look through the papers and says that everything checks out and he has gotten the job. Darius screams Yes and hugs the girl. The two laugh and she blushes. Darius then moves back and asks when he can start. She says how about in a week where she can get his employee information and things all set up. He completely agrees and thanks her again. He begins to walk out and forgets to ask her name. She says her name is Nicole Klett, but to just call her Nikki. Darius tells Nikki thanks and walks out the door. Nikki is smiling as the camera fades. Scene 6: Rita's Car Rita is driving as fast as she can make it to the pier. Nancy tells her to slow down and begins to pray that Vonny is okay. Rita tells her that everything is going to be fine, Vonny is strong and she wont let some little explosion kill her. Nancy tells her that this is not the time to make jokes and this is serious. ITs not one of those games of tag when you were little where she falls and gets a scratch; then the only thing needed is a bandaid to make it all better. This situation is major and life changing. Rita tells her that she knows its serious. We just have to think positive. Rita grabs her moms hand as she continues to drive. Scene 7: Alexandria Pier John is hit in the arm and kneels down behind a crate to get his gun. He begins to shoot and shots are thrown back and forth. The man begins to run and John goes after him. However, his arms starts having pain and he slows down. John stops and watches as the bastard gets away. Gary runs to see John hurt and he falls to the ground. Gary runs to his aid. Scene 8: Rita's Car Rita and Nancy pull up to the Alexandria Pier, however the officers tell them they cant come into the area because its the scene of an incident. Rita tells them that they are aware and they must get in there. The officers tell them no. She addresses her position of District Attorney and that her sister and her husband were on that yacht. Nancy tells the officer to please tell them some information. She says just wants to know if her daughter and husband are alright. Scene 9: Alexandria Pier Gary is carrying over to the ambulance to get patched up. He ask John what he was even doing. John tells him that the man came over and shot at him right when he turned around like a coward. He was trying to find out where Rick's wife was. Suddenly Aidan and Jacob walk over to the two and say well they dont think John will have to look anymore. John wonders what they are talking about and ask if they found her. Soon the four officers see a stretcher coming through with a body bag on it being wheeled to the ambulance. John's face goes blank as Gary's face is distraught at what has happened. Scene 10: Ambulance Rick is getting strapped in and prepares to be connected to the breathing machine for oxygen. He keeps mumbling and the paramedics tell him to relax and keep calm. He continues to mumble where is his wife and starts to pulls himself out of the stretcher to go look for her. The paramedics try to control him, but cant so they give him sleep gas to put into a sleep. Rick begins to calm down and suddenly falls into a sleep before mumbling, "Vonny." |
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| Terry | Nov 21 2013, 05:10 PM Post #2 |
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Vonny is dead...isn't she? At least that is what I have gathered...and if I am right about that then Rick has no idea that his wife is dead John McBain is slipping because it seems that he isn't as quick on the draw as he used to be because someone got the jump on him but even so I can see John getting his man one way or another even though his man escaped temporarily I see him getting the man who shot him eventually Rita being the D.A. wants to get to the Yacht because she has family on that Yacht, her brother-in-law and her sister, I definitely understand that and Nancy being just as distraught seeing as how this is her daughter and her son-in-law but even so Rita has a job to do as D.A. so you can bet that she is going to want a full-scale investigation into this Yacht Explosion But even so the A.P.D. are going to have quite the investigation here on their hands especially with this Yacht Explosion because if they still don't know who caused it then I wonder if it will end up being one of those unsolved crimes but either way I can see the A.P.D. solving this soon enough And Darius working at the Studio is good but Darrian I can see her working at this studio as a dancer |
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| ebard | Nov 23 2013, 05:51 AM Post #3 |
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I really like the momentum the explosion's given the show, but I feel like it's dragging along a bit. I'd like to see the aftermath of everything now. |
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| SoapHW | Jul 27 2015, 07:55 AM Post #4 |
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what ebard said! |
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