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| ebard | Jan 1 2014, 10:58 PM Post #1 |
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(Redaric Williams and Stephanie Jacobson are standing in front of a Skeletons title card) Stephanie: This pilot was good. Redaric: It had all of the makings of the next great teen drama. Stephanie: Part 90210 new and old. One Tree Hill, OC, Pretty Little Liars all wrapped into one. Redaric: It's no surprise that this show won the latest round of Pilot Season. Stephanie: If you like this pilot be on the look out for news regarding it's season premiere! Skeletons Episode One Load music for last scene before reading. Cast List: Contract: Dillon Michael Saunders III – Jean Luc Bilodeau Richie Lamont – Douglas Booth Allison Wellington – Kelly Goss Mariah Langston – Camryn Grimes Danielle “Danny” Santos – Alicia Josipovic Elizabeth Mitchell – Spencer Locke Aidan Riley – Erik Valdez Recurring: Ms. Sally Overton – Victoria Rowell Scene ::: The scene opens showing the outside of Berkeley Public High School, a Montage of different students are shown then it focuses in on Danielle who has started walking down the hallway and enters into the office, walking over to the front desk. Mariah: Hi! Welcome to Berkeley High! Can I help you? Danielle: Possibly, I am looking for the place that I can pick up my schedule I'm new here, and I don't exactly know where to go, in fact I'm shocked that I found the office. Mariah: It's not that hard to find your way around considering that everything is organized by halls, name please. Danielle: Danielle Santos. Mariah: Okay..... let me search for you and .... Ah..... here we are ... now I just need to print it for you and you can be on your way. Danielle: Thank you.... What exactly is your name? Mariah: Me? I'm Mariah Langston Vice President of the student body, nice to have you with us at Berkeley I hope your first day is both productive and amazing! Danielle: Thanks but I never met someone so cheerful for their first day of school. Mariah: Oh, I absolutely love school the environment here is amazing not to mention that It helps to have a safe haven of sorts, you know a place to escape... oh before I forge, here is your schedule. Danielle: Thank you, I guess that I'll be seeing you around? Mariah: Oh don't worry you will I took a little sneak peek of your schedule and we do have three of seven classes together, so I guess I'll be seeing you around. Danielle: (Somewhat Confused) Oh...great.... I'll see you around. Mariah: Okay, bye take care! Danielle walks out of the office. Scene ::: At the lockers, Elizabeth and Allison are standing around looking proud and triumphant. Elizabeth: I can't believe that you spent the entire summer in Hollywood, how was it? Was it awesome? Did you meet any celebs? Did you screw any? Allison: It was the single most amazing place I've ever been in my life, I had such a fun time! I did meet a few you know no one big just Ryan Philippe, Chase Crawford, Jennifer Aniston, and you know the rest of the A-list bunch! And you know I never kiss and tell, besides I'm faithful to Aidan. Elizabeth: Since when? Last week? You know you have never been faithful to Aidan. Allison: You are right but he would never know that. Elizabeth: Unless someone finds out that is. Allison: And who would dare to tell him if they did, come on, if anyone said they saw me with someone other than Aidan in any way that seemed romantic they would be committing social suicide. Because I mean think about it, who dares to challenge me will be done! Elizabeth: Oh I know there is no chance in hell that anyone would challenge the great Allison Wellington, you and your family are royalty around here there is nothing that has been done without the Wellington seal of approval. Allison: You are right, see Lizzie you are such a great friend, I honestly don't know what you would do without me, so anyways, did you make sure to schedule the exact same classes as me? Elizabeth: I sure did, I have already checked and we six of our seven classes together, the only class we don't have together is physics. Allison: Great! That's six classes I'll be passing this year, have you seen Aidan? Elizabeth: Not yet, sorry. Allison: That's odd, I wonder where he could be.... Oh here he comes! Aidan walks over to his girlfriend and Elizabeth, kissing Allison. Allison: Aw baby, I missed you so much! I am sorry that I really didn't get a chance to call you , you know what they say, time flies when you're having fun, what did you do with your summer? Aidan: I had a football camp, you know my dad he wanted his prodigy son to train at every waking moment of the day, and I guess you can I say I really didn't have fun. Allison: Aww baby, you don't have to worry anymore I am here and you know your father loves that you spend time with me so I think you're going to get a break from football but don't think you are getting off so easy. Aidan: (Confused) Um... what are you talking about? Allison: Because you didn't call me you know the phone works both ways and you could have called me just because I was too busy to call you doesn't mean that you were too busy to call me. Aidan: Isn't that a tad bit hypocritical Allison? Allison: (Offensively) Are you kidding me??? Did you just call me a hypocrite? Aidan: Look I'm sorry Allison I'm just kind of tired, I just got back a midnight and I really didn't sleep so it's really not a great day. Allison: That's totally fine, when you are feeling better why don't you come see me... come on Lizzie let’s go. Allison and Elizabeth walk away, when Richie walks over to Aidan. Richie: Dude your back from that camp? Aidan: Of course I am dude it's the first day of school. Richie: And? If I went anywhere nearly as important as a Patriots football camp I don't think I'd ever come back. Aidan: Be honest with yourself Rich, if you went anywhere important you'd probably get too baked to find your way back. Richie: You know what that is absolutely right, but that's beside the point dude, you have everything you have a dad who was not only a football player, dude he owns a car dealership, that's a whole lot of cars you can test drive... Aidan: Seriously dude? Do you think I would really want to test drive my dad's cars that are on the lot? Richie: Hey, I would, that's a real big dream of mine. Aidan: Well you know what if you do me a favor, I might be able to get that dream of yours fulfilled. Richie: Dude, if you can do that for me I will do anything that you need! Aidan: Well then I need a favor, I need for you to get some stuff for me.... The scene moves out. Scene: Danielle has walked down the hall and has found herself entering her first class, Physics, she takes a seat (Next to Dillon). Danielle: This is physics right? Dillon: Yup this is physics, if I may ask with without sound to mean, are you new because I've never seen you here before. Danielle: Well it's okay, I am new I just transferred from Hartford. Dillon: Well, let me officially welcome you to Berkeley! I'm Dillon Michael Saunders the third, student body president. Danielle: It's nice to meet you, why does your name sound so familiar. Dillon: Well I have my name has been passed down, my father is actually a senator by the same name and my grandfather ran for president. Danielle: That would definitely be why I know your name. The tardy bell rings... as Ms. Overton stands in front of the class. Ms. Overton: In case you people didn't know that was the tardy bell which means we will now begin class, I am Misses Overton and this is Physics, this is a not an easy course and I will tell you now half of you in here will fail.... Suddenly Elizabeth walks into the class. Elizabeth: Look Miss Overton I am so sorry that I'm late, I was stuck doing something for Mrs. Simmons. Overton: Elizabeth, I don't know if you know this but Mrs. Simmons retired last year, so that tired old excuse won't work anymore so now you need to sit down and shut up. Elizabeth: wow pissy much.... Overton: What was that?!?!? Elizabeth: OH nothing... I'm going take my seat now... Elizabeth takes a seat when Dillon and Danielle are whispering... Danielle: Wow this is a really nice teacher..... Dillon: Oh yeah she really is she's about as nice as a root canal. Danielle: I can see that, she doesn't exactly seem like she is a nice person. Dillon: Oh she was, up until last year when her husband left her, but you know I think it's like the Sahara down there. Danielle: Woah, that's taking it a bit far don't you think? Dillon: No, it’s the truth. The woman has been through a lot lately. Danielle: But couldn’t you have said it without mentioning… Dillon: Mentioning what? Danielle: You know, her… Dillon: Her what? Danielle’s voice gets slightly louder. Danielle: Vagina. Ms. Overton stops writing on the whiteboard and turns around. Ms Overton: Who in the hell just said that? Danielle is hesitant, but she eventually picks up her hand. Ms. Overton: Who are you? Danielle: I’m Danielle Santos… the new student. Ms. Overton: Oh well Danielle, let me put it to you this way. If you are going to sit in my class and talk about vaginas, I’m sorry to tell you but you have the wrong science. Now, unless you have something to add to our lecture about Newton’s laws, I suggest that you keep your mouth shut. Danielle: Yes ma’am. Ms. Overton: Good, now continuing on. Ms. Overton turns back to the board and continues to write. Danielle: You totally set me up didn’t you? Dillon: Take that as the official welcome to Berkeley from the student body president. Dillon smiles at Danielle as the scene fades out. Scene:: The bell for Physics to end has rang. Everyone starts to file out of class when Danielle starts to leave, Aidan walks up to her. Aidan: Hey. Danielle stops in her tracks and turns around looking at Aidan. Danielle: Um hi. Aidan: I’m sorry if this seems weird but I just wanted to come up to you and that the outburst in class was funny, even if it wasn’t planned to be. Danielle: I didn’t mean to say vagina, I was goateed into it but Dillon Michael Saunders the third. Aidan: Oh you must have gotten the official welcome, he’s a cool kid. I’m Aidan by the way. Danielle: And I’m Danielle. Aidan: I know I heard earlier. Can I ask you a question? Danielle: Um, sure. Aidan: What’s your next class? Danielle: I have health, appropriately enough. Aidan: Well then, I guess that’s lucky. Let’s go I’ll walk you there. Danielle: Umm sounds great. Danielle and Aiden walk away. They pass by Elizabeth who has a shocked look on her face. Scene:: The front office, Mariah is at the desk doing her homework. She looks up at the desk and sees a mirror. She looks at herself, her hair is in a bun and she is wearing no makeup. Her eyes are transfixed on the mirror. She grabs her bun and yanks the support out. Her hair falls down to her shoulders. She has a blank look on her face when suddenly a loud bang is heard. She suddenly comes back into a realization of what she was doing. She turns to the side and sees Allison. Allison: Hey, Sarah plain and tall, what’s wrong with you? Mariah: Nothing, absolutely nothing. Mariah starts to put her bun back in. Allison: I don’t know why you are putting your hair back into that thick bun. Your hair looks so much better down. I mean it’s an improvement on that normal librarian look you have. Mariah: Whatever, what can I help you with? Allison: I work in here this period, well me and Lizzie. I don’t know where she is but I guarantee that she will be here. Mariah: Oh joy… Scene:: Health class, The teacher is teaching when Lizzie walks in. She goes over to the teacher and hands him a note. The teacher reads the not aloud. Teacher: Danielle Santos you are needed in the office. Lizzie walks out and Danielle follows shortly thereafter. Lizzie turns around and looks at Danielle. Elizabeth: Stay away from him. Danielle: I’m sorry what? Elizabeth: You heard me, I said stay away from him. Danielle: I heard you the first time, but whom in the hell is he? Elizabeth: Aidan, he belongs to my BFFL. Danielle: What in the hell is a BFFL? Elizabeth: Best friend for life. Duh, look I’m going to keep it short and sweet, stay away from him. Elizabeth leaves. Suddenly, a flashback occurs. It’s dark but a glimpse of lights can be seen. The sounds of screams are heard and suddenly a gun shot. Danielle takes a few deep breaths before heading back into class. Scene:: Men’s Bathroom, Aidan is in the bathroom. He quickly surveys the room and makes sure that there is no one in the bathroom. He quickly takes out a small pill bottle, He quickly takes three of the pills. Suddenly a flashback comes over him. “Take a few of these, it’ll take the edge off, trust me.” “You Know my Secret” Allison is in the office fixing her makeup, she suddenly gets a flashback to Hollywood, she is in a hotel room with an unidentified man, the two fall into bed with each other. The scene transitions to Dillon. He is sitting in class writing, he looks up and see’s a picture of his father and grandfather in an office. He walks in with another guy. While the elder Saunder’s men embrace the young man, Dillon feels uncomfortable, he looks on his father’s desk and see’s something. “All I ever wanted was your love.” Skeletons…. |
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