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Days: Episode #86; Dec. 28th
Topic Started: Jan 6 2014, 06:02 AM (123 Views)
DaveBedford
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Scene 1:

That morning at the Wesley residence, Brady is still reeling from Chloe's revelation but isn't sure how to react.

Brady is dumbfounded. "So you knew that Phillip was Parker's dad along?"

Chloe tries to explain her actions. "Yes, I knew. I didn't do this out of hate or malice towards Phillip. I was trying to protect Parker."

"You were protecting Parker? That makes no sense, Chloe" says a confused Brady.

"It actually does. I was protecting Parker from Kate and Victor. They are bottom feeders who will do what they want to keep my son from me at every turn" says Chloe in a matter of fact way.

Brady becomes more annoyed by the situation. "I don't know what to think and I need time to process this before I decide what to do next."

Brady leaves the home. Chloe is worried that Brady is a ticking time bomb and will explode at any moment

Scene 2:

Meanwhile at the hospital, Det. Brady, Officer O'leary, and Det. Ramsey arrive to see Kayla after she placed a strange call earlier that day.

Hope walks towards the nurse's station and speaks with Kayla. "We got your message. What's going on?"

Kayla hands Hope a bag with a red powdery substance. "The last few nights, 3 young adults have died after taking this drug."

"Have u run tests to find out what this drug is?" asks Hope.

"I have. All I can tell is it's a synthetic designer drug that's potent but i'll run more tests to find out what's in the drug" says Kayla.

Hope takes the bag with the red powdery substance and hands it to Officer O'leary. "Make sure that this goes in evidence. It's a key piece to finally finding out who is running drugs thru our town."

"Sure thing, Det. Brady."

Det. Ramsey sneaks away and calls his employer, Alejandro Cruz about the Salem PD's latest find.

"Mr. Cruz, it's Det. Ramsey. I thought you should know that the Salem PD confiscated 1 of your bags with the designer drug. Their putting it in evidence as we speak. What do you want me to do?" asks Ramsey as he waits for instructions.

"Destroy the evidence. It can't be traced back back to me" says Alejandro.

Scene 3:

That night at the Horton residence, Bo is with Jennifer as she's ready to finally ready to give a statement regarding her attack.

"Whenever your ready."

Jennifer takes a deep breath and sighs before speaking. "On Nov. 9th, I was a victim of a sexual assault at the hands of Lawrence Alamain. I did not say anything before because I was scared and Lawrence had threatened me and my family."

Bo holds her hand and smiles. "That's good. Now we have enough to arrest Lawrence Alamain for rape and you'll be safe in the process.





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SoapHW
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Poor Jennifer! That's so sad. But that was a well-written if short scene. I just love the new format and am hoping you continue with it. Can't wait for the next episode.
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Terry
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Love that Alejandro wants Ramsey to destroy the evidence because it is really smart when you think about it because if Ramsey does that, no evidence whatsoever can be traced back to Ramsey but ultimately it cannot be traced back to Cruz at all but also love that Cruz is willing to get rid of any or all witnesses or anyone who seems to get in his way, he is what any good mobster is or what any good mobster should be

Jennifer maybe now she can finally heal from what has happened

And Brady I expected him to go off on Chloe like that but I wonder if Chloe may have just sinked her own relationship with Brady right down the tubes
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DaveBedford
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Thanks for the comments.
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Mylo
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I wish we got more of Jennifer in that scene. In fact I hope we see more of Jennifer struggle with this rape and what it does to her family. I think this could be good material for the show!

Things are heating up with Det. Ramsey! Can't wait for Hope to take him down!

Like that you through Chloe knowing the truth about Parker in between her and Brady. I really think there needs to be a Phillip/Chloe/Brady triangle!
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