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| Days: Episode #89 - #90; Jan. 2nd | |
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| DaveBedford | Jan 11 2014, 09:48 AM Post #1 |
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That morning at University hospital, Melanie is in with Dr. Evans to see her about recent troubles she's had concerning her kidnapping. " So Melanie, what brings you here this morning to see me?" "I was recently kidnapped by Vivian Alamain. She chained me up and said I would never see my family ever again and to make matters worse, she cut off my finger and sent it in a box to my family" said Melanie as a tear rolled down her cheek. "How did you manage to escape and did anything else happen?" asked Marlena. "When Vivian brought me food, I waited til she untied me and a I grabbed a loose brick and knocked her out. I was able to get a ride back to Salem and be reunited with my family but recently I've been having bad dreams and blowing up at people for no reason. The people who loved me the most I ended up pushing away but after my recent episode, my friend helped me see that I needed to seek treatment" said Melanie. "In my professional opinion, it sounds like early stages of PTSD but I'm glad they convinced you to do this. It's not an easy step to take by any means. I invited someone that is in the same boat as you." Marlena brings in Jack Devereux and Melanie smiles. "I'm sorry how I acted towards you. I know you were only trying to help me" said Melanie as she apologized. "It's ok. I understand" said Jack. "Jack, if you don't mind, can you tell Melanie what you went thru?" asked Marlena. "Sure. I was working on a story in Afghanistan when rebels kidnapped and tortured me but I was later rescued by US forces in the area and brought home" said Jack. "Oh, my god. That's horrible. How did you survive til you were rescued?" asked a shocked Melanie. "I kept thinking of my family and the people who loved me because they got me thru it" ~ ~ ~ Meanwhile at the courthouse, Nick Fallon's trial is getting ready to begin. Nick enters to find Maggie and his parents sitting behind them and he shares a smile. Judge McDermott (David Canary) exits his chambers and annouces it'll be a bench trial and asks DA Woods (David Leisure) and Owen Miles (Patrick Duffy) to commence the opening remarks. Owen tells the judge that there's no doubt his client committed the act but that that there was bias and conflict with the cops that overshadows everything. The DA tells the judge that they'll prove there was no misconduct on the cops behalf. Judge McDermott asks DA Woods to call his 1st witness. DA Woods calls Will Horton (Guy Wilson) to the stand. "Do you swear to tell the truth and nothing but the truth?" asks the DA. "I do." "Can you please state your name for the court?" "Will Horton" "Mr Horton, please tell the court of your recent issues with the defendant, Nick Fallon leading up to your assault" said the DA. "I guess the main thing was he blackmailed me into giving my rights away to my daughter, Arianna Grace because he thought 2 gay people shouldn't raise a child" said Will as he explained the situation. "How did the assault come about?" asked the DA. "On Sept. 6th, I left my boyfriend, Sonny Kiriakis to go to class when I was followed into discrete area of Horton Town Square and assaulted. As I was being beaten, the person called me faggot and left me there til Chad DiMera found me and brought me to the hospital for medical treatment. For months I didn't know Nick was my attacker til very recently" said Will. "How did you find out it was Nick Fallon who attacked you?" "Me and boyfriend, Sonny Kiriakis setup a sting operation with the Salem PD to get Nick Fallon to confess" said Will. "No more questions for this witness." "Mr. Miles. Would you like to cross examine this witness?" asks the judge. "Yes, I would." "Mr Horton, did my client know you were recording him?" asked Owen. "No, he didn't" "So essentially, you entrapped and coerced a confession out of my client. Is that a fair assessment?" asked Owen. "I wouldn't say that." "Who at the Salem PD set the sting up?" asked Owen. "Det. Hope Brady" said Will. "I have no more questions for this witness" said Owen. Will steps down and sits back down behind the DA. Judge McDermott adjourns court for the rest of the day. ~ ~ ~ Early that evening, Det. Brady and Officer O'leary (Mark Collier) descend upon upon Det. Ramsey's (Hunt Block) apt to make arrest. They enter the apt but it's empty and find nothing. To the shock of Hope and James, they receive a surprising call from Ramsey himself wanting to cut a deal. "Det. Brady, this is Lee Ramsey. I'm calling because I want to make a deal. I have information as to who is running drugs thru Salem. If I talk, I want immunity and witness protection. If your interested, i'll be in the discrete area under the arc where the stairs are in Horton Town Square" said a worried Lee. Hope hangs up and James wonders who called. "Who was that?" asked James. "That was Det. Ramsey wanting to cut a deal on information he has regarding the drug smuggling" "Do you think his information is reliable?" asked James. "I think so because whoever he reported to was leading this operation and knew what they were doing" said Hope confidently. Hope and James leave to go see Lee Ramsey but soon after, 1 of Alejandro Cruz's (Nestor Serrano) informants call him with an update. "Boss, I overheard something that you need to be aware of. I found out your mole, Det. Ramsey is planning on cutting a deal and giving you up in the process. How do you want to me handle the situation?" asked the informant. "Det. Ramsey can not cut that deal. Get to him before the cops do and silence him once and for all" said Alejandro. "You got it, boss." ~ ~ ~ Later that evening at the Alamain residence, Bo arrives to arrest Lawrence for the rape of Jennifer Horton but the doors to the home are open and Bo enters to search. Bo looks around and doesn't find Lawrence and leaves. Bo returns home and is stunned to find Lawrence on his doorstep. Bo goes to arrest him but Lawrence pulls a gun and shoots him. ~ ~ ~ Back in the discrete area under the stairs in Horton Town Square, Det. Ramsey is waiting when Alejandro Cruz's man comes up from behind and shoots him in the head. The hitman flees as Det. Brady and Officer O'leary arrive to Det. Ramsey dead on the ground. "Son of a bitch!" exclaims Hope. "This was our best lead and he's dead. We're back to square one" said an annoyed James. "Whoever he was working for knew we were coming and killed him" said Hope. "We maybe back at square one but we'll work extra hard to catch this asshole and bring him down" said James. ~ ~ ~ Back at the Brady residence, Carly arrives on the scene looking for Bo to see if he arrested Lawrence but instead, she comes upon a horrific sight with Bo laying shot and in a pool of pool on the ground. "Oh, my god! Bo!" exclaims Carly. Carly checks for a pulse on Bo but it's extremely faint. Carly takes out her phone and calls 911. "911, This is Carly Manning. I'm at Cooper Latern Drive where Det. Bo Brady was shot. He has lost alot of blood and has an extremely faint pulse. Please send an ambulance immediately" said a frantic Carly. "Help is on the way. Please stand by." Carly hangs up and waits for help to arrive. "Don't die on me, Bo. Keep fighting" said Carly as tears rolled down her cheek. ~ ~ ~ |
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| Terry | Jan 11 2014, 02:10 PM Post #2 |
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I told you that Alejandro would find a way to get to Ramsey because the man isn't stupid because he is probably one of the most notorious mobsters that Salem has ever seen and he didn't get to where he is who he is by being careless so he did the same thing by getting rid of Ramsey because Ramsey was about to talk and give him up so Alejandro's hitman kills Ramsey which is pretty inspired if I do say so myself because now the Salem PD have nothing on Alejandro, nothing to tie him to Ramsey and nothing to tie him to the drugs that are coming into Salem so I wonder what Alejandro's next move will be? Something tells me that he will target Stefano and or Victor and or their families because if he does that then I can see Alejandro going after EJ, Chad, Kristen, Philip, Brady, Bo, Hope, etc. anyone who is related to Stefano and or Victor as a way for this mob war potentially to escalate Bo getting shot by Lawrence and Carly being the one to find Bo, I just hope Carly tells Bo's family because they should be notified about this because Hope is Bo's wife and not to mention the rest of Bo's family needs to know about this like Bo's father Victor, Bo's mother Caroline, Bo's brother Roman, Bo's sister Kayla, Bo's brother Philip, Bo's nephew Brady, anyone who is a Kiriakis or a Brady needs to be notified about Bo but at the same time Lawrence ever since he shot Bo you know as well as I do Lawrence is going to disappear and that he is most likely going to go on the run becoming a fugitive because Lawrence is an Alamain he has the money, power and resources at his disposal to disappear so the Salem PD won't be able to find him much less anyone else for that matter which means Lawrence will most likely be on Interpol's watch list but he will also no doubt be tracked by the ISA which of course is a government spy agency that is exactly like the WSB of GH Either way Bo since he got shot I wonder if he will be able to live through this? I just hope Carly didn't find him too late And Nick's trial at this point could go either way because Nick he could either go to prison or he could be acquitted due to his mental instability but at the same time Will testifying against his own cousin Nick I can understand that but I wonder just who else will testify in this trial? I wonder if Hope will testify in this trial considering Hope is Nick's cousin but I am glad that Nick's Great-Aunt Maggie was here for the trial and that Nick's parents Jessica Horton Fallon and Joshua Fallon were here for their son Nick's trial but I wonder about where all the other Hortons were for Nick's trial? I get Nick's mother and father being there but I wonder what Jessica and Joshua think about Will testifying considering Will is family I love that Melanie is dealing with her PTSD or that she is trying to deal with it and that she is having her therapy sessions with Marlena because if anyone could help her to deal with it, it is definitely Marlena and Jack of all people being the one to be at Melanie's session was great because Jack too is also a PTSD survivor in the sense that he too was in captivity when he was in Afghanistan so he definitely understands what Melanie's going through, so I am glad that you did that Great episode |
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| SoapHW | Jan 12 2014, 01:46 AM Post #3 |
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Really amazing episode. 2 thumbs up! I was hooked. I am glad Jack and Melanie are getting help. Poor Bo. Can't wait for more. |
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| DaveBedford | Jan 12 2014, 07:08 AM Post #4 |
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Thanks for the comments |
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| Mylo | Jan 13 2014, 08:25 PM Post #5 |
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Great playing Jack with Melanie. Love seeing Marlena in her element! Bo being shot was unexpected. It seems like your slowly setting up a James/Hope/Bo/Carly story. I like it. Ramsey's dead! Hope is being implicated in setting up Nick! Good Episode!! |
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