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Episode #321; OAD: Monday January 6, 2014
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EPISODE #321
OAD: Monday January 6, 2014


SCENE ONE: GORDON BAY POLICE DEPARTMENT

Jordan is sitting at her desk. She is hastily going through papers when someone places their hands on her desk. She looks up and sees Sarah standing at her desk. She stands up from the behind her desk before she begins to speak.

JORDAN
Sarah, I guess this should be a surprise? What do you want?

SARAH
Jordan, I’m here to see your brother. You know that, I would have no other reason that I would have to come to this place.

JORDAN
Why in the world would you want to see Damian? You two haven’t been in the same circle in what? Two years, I don’t think that you should be visiting him.

SARAH
Excuse me? You aren’t supposed to say who visits Damian. I’m still his friend to an extent. I’m here to see why he did what he did.

JORDAN
You know what he did. What reason do you have in wondering why he did it? There is not a question in my mind as to there being no reason in which you should be here. Think about it, you have done nothing but badmouth Damian for the longest time. What reason would you possibly have in wanting to come here?

SARAH
Because I want to get him some of the help that he deserves. It’s obvious he won’t be getting it from you, his own sister.

JORDAN
What reason do I have to help someone who attempted to kidnap a child? Someone who was going to possibly go as far as to jumping off of a building to make sure that Ryan didn’t have a chance to be with his son.

SARAH
Really Jordan? How is that any different than what you did?

Jordan gives Sarah a quizzical look.

SCENE TWO: QUINN’S APARTMENT

Heather is quickly throwing clothes in a suitcase. She quickly smashes the top of the suitcase and starts to zip it up. After a moment of struggling, she picks up her bag and walks over to the door. She turns around and looks at the apartment she shakes her head.

HEATHER
Thank god this is over.

She turns around and opens the door, she is shocked to see Evan standing there.

HEATHER
Evan, what are you doing here?

EVAN
I came to see you, we haven’t talked in awhile and I’m sorry about that. I’m sorry, were you going on a trip or something?

HEATHER
Umm… you could say that. I’m going back to New Orleans.

EVAN
Oh, some business you couldn’t take care of here or something?

HEATHER
No… I’m going to New Orleans for good. Evan, I can’t be here anymore.

Evan is shocked by Heather’s admission.

EVAN
What? I thought you loved it here?

HEATHER
I loved it here like six months ago. There is nothing here for me Evan.

EVAN
I’m here.

HEATHER
But you’re not mine. You have a few months of school left then you’re going to University. You know that you have nothing but a great life here, you don’t have to worry about me. You have people that love you. You have Hillary and you have Bianca.

EVAN
That’s great and all… but it’s not like having you. Heather, you raised me for sixteen and a half years of my life. You are someone who has been so instrumental in my life. You know that I love you, even if I don’t say it enough.

HEATHER
Evan, I love you just as much as you love me. You don’t need me anymore though. There is nothing that I can do for you that Hillary can’t. She’s your biological mother. She’s someone who can help you out more than I ever could. You know that I love you, but she’s going to be better for you than I could ever be.

EVAN
Don’t say that. I know that I don’t give you enough credit, but you’ve done a lot more for me than I could ever imagine. Heather, Hillary may be the person who birthed my biologically, but you were there for me through a lot of my life’s trials and tribulations. You adopted me before I was a year old. You were there for my first steps. You were there for my first words. You potty trained me, you taught me how to read. Do you need any more examples as to why you were so instrumental in my life?

Heather walks back towards the couch and throws her bag down on the side of it. She begins to cry as Evan walks over to the couch and takes a seat.

HEATHER
Evan… I love you, but I can’t be here anymore. You don’t know how much stress this puts on me. Evan, you don’t realize how much I didn’t want to be here. I did the worst thing possible to your father. I’m the reason why he’s dead. If I wouldn’t have slept with Quinn, he would still be alive. We would still have our life together. We would all still be in New Orleans, and we wouldn’t have to separate like this. You don’t understand…

EVAN
Don’t understand what? The fact that you’re trying to run away from this? You made this bed for yourself Heather. The second you crawled into bed with Quinn, it was cemented. You ruined something that we had going back home. I understand that you couldn’t prevent my mother from coming into the picture, but we could have dealt with that. Your mistake with Quinn is the reason we are where we are today.

Heather stands up from the couch putting her hands on her hips.

HEATHER
You don’t think I don’t realize that? You’re beating a dead horse by actually saying that. If I could go back in time… to change what I did I would…

EVAN
But you know that you cannot. There is nothing that you could ever do to take that back, but running away from your problem isn’t a solution. Heather, you know there is no way to time back time, but you can fix your future.

HEATHER
That’s exactly what I’m trying to do. That’s exactly why I’m trying to run away. Evan, there is nothing for me here. My job is absolutely terrible, I had a better post back home. You aren’t with me anymore, you’ve found a way to be more than comfortable with Hillary. Quinn doesn’t love me, he never did. I was just a pawn in his game to get custody of you. You know that. I’ve just been a puppet this entire time, this my way to prove that I can do something to take charge of my life. I need to get away Evan, I just need to get away…

Heather begins to cry as the scene fades out.

SCENE THREE: TRISHA AND RYAN’S APARTMENT

Sophie is walking out of her bedroom when her phone rings. She grabs her phone and answers it.
SOPHIE
Hello… You wanna see me? I thought you never wanted to speak to me again? Well, I guess I could come and meet you… where are you? Open my door?

Sophie goes over to the door and looks through the peephole. She smiles then hangs up her phone. She opens the door to see Judd standing there.

SOPHIE
Judd… Hi.

JUDD
Hey, can I come in?

SOPHIE
Yeah, of course you can. I’m sorry that the place is a mess. You know, with a baby brother and all, it’s hard to be able to keep the place clean.

JUDD
Well, I know. I just wanted to say something.

SOPHIE
What’s that?

Judd walks into the apartment as Sophie closes the door.

JUDD
Look, I just wanted to say that I am sorry for the way I handled the Dante thing. You know, I just am hurting about it still.

SOPHIE
Judd, I didn’t mean for that to happen. That’s the last thing that I wanted. You know that… I love you. You were my first. Judd, there is no way that I meant to hurt you.

JUDD
But you did, Soph, I was so ready to just make a commitment to you. You know this is our last year of high school. We always talked about going to the same college. We always talked about how we’d get a way to get one of those coed dorm rooms and just feel like we could survive together. We talked about all those things, and you threw them away with a kiss.

Tears begin to roll down Sophie’s eyes.

SOPHIE
Judd… you know that I didn’t have any intention of doing that. Judd, I loved you then. I still love you know, I just don’t know what to say. I don’t… know what else I could say. I told you that I was sorry for what I did. I know that it was a mistake that I even tried to keep it a secret from you. I ruined more than just my relationship with you. I ruined your friendship with Evan.

JUDD
You didn’t ruin my friendship with Evan, he betrayed my trust. He was the one who agreed to hide that secret with you. You know that, he made his own bed and he’s going to have to lie in it.

SOPHIE
You can’t fault just him, we both played equal parts in that game. Judd… I still love you.

JUDD
You’re incapable of love. If you loved me you wouldn’t have kissed Dante.

SOPHIE
Judd, it was just a kiss! It was nothing more and nothing less. Judd, there is no love for Dante. He was a mistake, I wouldn’t be here right now if I didn’t have the remorse in my heart for what happened. Please, just hear me out.

JUDD
I’m done hearing you out, it’s my turn now.

Sophie sits on the couch as the scene fades.

SCENE FOUR: QUINN’S APARTMENT

EVAN
Heather, please just stay. You don’t realize it, but you’ve done a lot for me here.

HEATHER
I have, like what? What have I possibly done for you since we moved to Gordon Bay? What have I done that has positively benefitted you in any way? What have I done that Hillary hasn’t? Evan, I was just a substitute for your real mother. A glorified surrogate. Hillary’s back in your life, and now it’s time for me to get away.

EVAN
Would you please shut up? You are more than that to me. You are my mother. You may not be by blood, but you will always be a mother to me.

HEATHER
Really?

EVAN
I wouldn’t lie about that? Heather, you did so much for me. You were there for me through every milestone that I possibly could have needed someone for. I may not have shown you all the love and affection that you deserved every day, but you know that you deserved it. You were the mother I never had. Just because my birth mom is back in my life, it doesn’t mean that she’s taken your place. You both share a very special place in my heart. That’s why I really want for you to stay. I want for you to be able to see my walk across that stage at graduation. I want for you to see me move on to college. I want you there for all those milestones that I haven’t reached yet. Mom, I want for you to be able to say that you were there for all those things. I want you to be there when I get married, and when I have kids. You are just like Hillary, you are my mother.
Heather sits back down and hugs Evan. The two embrace in the long hug before Heather lets him.

HEATHER
Thank you son. You’ve made me realize that you need me more than I ever would have thought that you needed me. I appreciate you so much, and I love you… more than words could ever mean. Evan, you remind me so much of Eric. He may not have been your biological father, but he influenced you so much, I honestly believe you’ll be a great man because of it.

EVAN
I love you… so much.

HEATHER
I love you too…

Evan gets up and scratches his head.

EVAN
I guess I’ll be seeing you around?

HEATHER
Yeah, I think so.

Evan smiles as he leaves the apartment.

SCENE FIVE: GORDON BAY POLICE DEPARTMENT

JORDAN
What exactly are you talking about Ashton?

SARAH
What in the hell do you think that I’m talking about? I’m talking about the fact that you switched those paternity results, did you think that the entire freaking town wouldn’t find out about that? I mean Damian blabbed to Trisha months ago. How does it feel being the new town pariah? I mean you’re up there with the likes of Quinn Smalls and your own brother. Carmen MacPherson and even good old Paul Simpson. I swear, if there was a Mount Rushmore of Gordon Bay pariahs, you’d be right there.

JORDAN
You know you’re a bitch right? You can’t help but to gloat every time you end up walking in here. You have some sort of complex. You have to stick your nose where it doesn’t belong. You have to just go ahead and comment on everything no matter if it involves you or not. I swear, you must think you are the savior of Gordon Bay or something.

SARAH
I’m not the savoir of anything, but I will always take the time to call you out on all your crap. You talk about complexes, you have the most obvious of them all. You have the biggest messiah complex that I’ve ever seen. Jordan, you tried to play god. You kept Ryan away from his child for months! You did one of the most dastardly things that anyone could do, and to a man that you claimed to love no less. It makes me sick that you could even look at yourself.
JORDAN
This isn’t about me, and you know it. You just need something to talk about. You know damn well that you don’t care. You’re not seeing my brother, and I’m going to make sure of that Sarah.

SARAH
Do and say what you want Jordan. You realize I know that you’ll eventually be off duty right? Trust me, I’ll be able to see Damian soon enough, see you around.

Sarah walks away and Jordan scoffs. She slowly walks away from her desk and goes to where the prisoners are kept.

SCENE SIX: RYAN AND TRISHA’S APARTMENT

SOPHIE
Say whatever you have to say Judd, I deserve it.

JUDD
As much as I want to say what I have to say, you don’t deserve it. I still love you like nothing ever happened. As hard as it is for me to say it, I hate you for what you did. As much as I hate you for it, I love you too much to let it affect me anymore.

SOPHIE
Judd… I don’t deserve it…

JUDD
You don’t, but all may eventually be forgiven. I’m not sure what to do… I just want you to know that I love you… I love you with all my heart and soul. Even with that, I cannot honestly say that we should ever be together again. I think this is all for the best, I’m sorry… it’s over permanently over Sophie…

Judd walks to the door and leaves. Sophie sits on the couch and begins to cry harder.

SCENE SEVEN: QUINN’S APARTMENT

Heather is sitting on the couch. She grabs her phone and looks at it. She begins to scroll through pictures of her and Evan. She laughs at a few before she looks on the coffee table. On the table, her airplane ticket. She reaches over and grabs it. She looks at it for a second before she gets up from the couch. She grabs her bag and walks over to the door. She opens the apartment door and puts her bag on the outside. She looks around the apartment and reaches for the light switch to her right. She turns off the light and closes the door as the scene fades.
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So it seems Heather she is leaving town, she is leaving Gordon Bay but with her leaving town it gives her the opportunity for a fresh start and she says she wants to go back to New Orleans because she was happy there...believe me I get that but at the same time I get Evan trying to do everything he could to have Heather stay in town but she is dead set on leaving but that doesn't mean that she will never stop loving Evan as her son and she could always visit him in Gordon Bay or when he is away at university

Judd breaking up with Sophie, I wonder where Judd goes from here? Or I wonder where Sophie goes from here?

As for Jordan and Sarah their scenes I loved them a whole lot I really did but at the same time Sarah she seems dead-set on seeing Damian, I wonder why? Does this mean that on some deep unconscious level that she somehow is still in love with Damian despite everything he's done?
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Like that your writing out characters before the finale. It was time for Heather to go!

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Agree with Mylo, thin the cast before the finale-great strategy. Heather's exit was everything it should've been too!
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Yay, CTH is back with a great episode!

I cannot STAND Jordan! Such a fake snotty bitch! Go Sarah!

Heather's scenes with Evan were just great! Wow. TOPaward worthy.

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