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| Episode #10 - February 3rd 2014 | |
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| superstargirl818 | Aug 8 2014, 07:08 AM Post #1 |
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EPISODE #10 – February 3rd 2014 SCENE 1: (Kayla wakes up, yawns slowly and climbs out of bed before looking over at the wedding dress hung on the wardrobe and smiling excitedly. Over at the Connor’s house, Angie knocks on Nick’s bedroom door but there is no answer so she knocks again. Frowning impatiently she opens the door to find the room empty At Kayla’s house, she is stood in the kitchen, a cup of coffee in one hand a phone in the other) KAYLA: No, I wanted pink and white roses...No, I don’t want lilies...because they are for funerals! (Suddenly there was a frantic knocking at the door, Kayla frowned and walked towards it) KAYLA: Look I am getting married in 5 hours and I want everything perfect! I ordered these flowers months ago! It’s not my fault your refrigerator broke! (She opens the door to see Angie stood there) KAYLA: Hey Angie look is this urgent? I’ve got a flower emergency going on here ANGIE: Is Nick here? KAYLA: No…I thought he was staying with you…why? (Angie didn’t say anything, just looked worriedly at Kayla whose face dropped at it dawned on her) KAYLA: Where is he?! SCENE 2: (Amanda stood in the bathroom, dressed in a pretty lilac dress, she struggled to put her necklace on. Ryan walked past and noticed. He stepped inside the bathroom) RYAN: Need a hand? AMANDA: Thanks (She smiled appreciatively as he walked over and fastened the necklace, brushing his fingers on her shoulders she shivered) RYAN: All done AMANDA: So…will I do? (Ryan looks at her, smiling gently at her beauty) RYAN: Yeah…I think you will AMANDA: Look, if you want me to come with you to counselling today… I mean not come in with you, but I could drive you and…wait in the waiting room…maybe. RYAN: It’s fine, you’ve got enough going on today with the wedding and everything AMANDA: Yeah but that’s not for hours and it finishes before the wedding. RYAN: It’s okay, thank you but I think I’ll be fine AMANDA: Okay (She says the words unsure as he turns around to leave) AMANDA: Ryan… (He turns around and she’s about to say something when her phone begins ringing. She picks it up from the bathroom cabinet and looks at the caller ID) AMANDA: It’s Kayla…I’ve got to take this RYAN: It’s fine, I have to go anyway (Amanda sighs and answers the phone and Ryan walks out of the room) AMANDA: Hello Kayla…whoa whoa slow down! Nick’s WHAT?! SCENE 3: (Amanda steps into the Connor’s house which is absolute chaos, Kayla is sat on the couch crying, comforted by Nancy, Amanda is sat in the corner on her phone and Angie, Carl and Will are all talking loudly at the same time) ANGIE: I think we should phone the police WILL: Mom! I’ve told you, we can’t the police when we’re not even 100% sure he’s missing! ANGIE: He could be dead in a ditch for all we know! CARL: He’ll probably be with Max…wait till I get my hands on them both! AMANDA: Look I think we should all calm down and take a deep breath, he could’ve gone for a walk! Tom and Cameron said he got home safe last night. KAYLA: I think we just need to face facts…he’s got cold feet and dumped me! NANCY: No he wouldn’t do that! (Suddenly the door slammed and everyone rushed over to see who it was. Max was stood there) MAX: What? Everything okay? ANGIE: Where have you been? Where’s your brother? MAX: I’ve just been for a walk…What? Do you mean he’s not up yet?! CARL: It doesn’t look like he’s even gone to bed! His rooms empty and he’s not answering his phone. ANGIE: See! Something IS wrong! I KNEW it! Oh, where is he? SCENE 4: (Ian was stood in the living room, tying his tie in the mirror when there was a knock at the door. He frowned and walked up to the door. He opened it and his father was stood there. He gasped in shock) IAN: What are you doing here? STAN: You know what the deal is…You don’t answer your calls, I come and find you! IAN: My battery ran out STAN: Hmmm…Well I hope that’s the case because if I find out you’ve been trying to dodge me… IAN: Dad…I’m busy, I’m going to a wedding this afternoon. I can’t just…be at your beck and call whenever you want me too! Not if don’t want me raising suspicion! STAN: Fine, meet me at that café round the corner in thirty minutes IAN: Fine, just go! (Ian sighed desperately as Stan walked away. He turned and walked back into the house when he heard his grandmother call) ELIZABETH: Ian? Was that the door? IAN: Yeah, it was just a...Jehovas Witness, They’re gone now. SCENE 5: (Ryan sat uncomfortably in the seat as Dr Miller sat down) DR MILLER: Sorry about that, my first session overran slightly (Ryan didn’t say anything, just stared at her not showing an emotion) DR MILLER: So last time you were here, I asked you to go home and think about what you wanted to gain from these sessions. Have you thought any more about that? RYAN: I have… (He said the words solemnly) DR MILLER: And? (She sat up in her chair eagerly) RYAN: Well I wanted to talk about something that’s been bothering me…I have…an….unhealthy fear of…seagulls (She sighed and sat back in her chair, as he continued talking seriously) RYAN: Ever since Finding Nemo…you know the movie right? Well…with their big beaks and their beady little eyes…traumatising…I mean they almost ate Nemo. (She rolled her eyes) DR MILLER: I know what you’re doing (He raised his eyebrow) RYAN: Oh really…well enlighten me…Doctor (He said the words sneeringly) DR MILLER: You’re putting off talking about the real things because it hurts, you put on this act but inside, you’re scared, you have pain…and you cover it up by talking about… RYAN: Seagulls? How dare you Dr Miller! It took a lot to open up about that today! (He said in mock outrage) DR MILLER: Tell me about your childhood… RYAN: Why? DR MILLER: Why not? RYAN: Because it’s irrelevant DR MILLER: I’m the Doctor here, I decide what’s irrelevant or not and by the way you’re avoiding the subject I can guess it’s pretty relevant so…are you going to spill? (He stared daggers at her) SCENE 6: (Ian steps into the café and notices Stan sat at a table drinking a cup of coffee. He goes over and sits down) STAN: You want something to eat or drink? IAN: No, I told you I’m going to a wedding so I can’t stay long. Now what’s up? STAN: We’re moving too slow. We need to pick things up IAN: What? Are you serious? STAN: Look, I need that money IAN: It’s too soon, they don’t trust me yet! STAN: Then MAKE them trust you! IAN: It’s been less than three weeks since their long lost grandson turned up on their doorstep…do you really think if I start asking for money now, they’re not going know exactly what I’m up too? At the very least it’ll make them suspicious? STAN: I don’t care…I’m desperate IAN: I said no (Ian stood up to leave and Stan grabbed his arm) STAN: Look, I’m in deep with some guys that I owe money to, If I don’t get it they’re going to kill me. (Ian sighed) IAN: I’ll see what I can do but I can’t promise anything… STAN: You need to get it done today! IAN: T-today? STAN: Ian, I’m not asking…I’m telling you…get it done! Or you won’t like what happens next (Ian nodded and Stan let him go and watched as he walked out the café) SCENE 7: (Ryan was sat in the office talking to Dr Miller) DR MILLER: Well? RYAN: I don’t know what you want me to say…I had asthma, I enjoyed comic books, I was a bit of a dork really. DR MILLER: Look, cards on the table. I can be pushy, insensitive, unprofessional at times. (Ryan scoffed) DR MILLER: But I get the job done, I know it’s hard to reveal things that you’ve kept locked away for years but I promise you…It’s the best thing to do and you will feel better for doing it. So if I ask you a few questions about your childhood, are you going to answer them honestly? RYAN: Whatever DR MILLER: I’ll take that as a yes…Just remember there is no right or wrong answer… RYAN: Fine DR MILLER: Your parents…what where they like? RYAN: I never knew my dad, he split before I was born DR MILLER: That must have been hard RYAN: Not really…you don’t miss what you never had right? DR MILLER: What about your mom? RYAN: What about her? (Dr Miller raised her eyebrow. Ryan sighed) RYAN: She was okay I suppose… DR MILLER: You suppose? RYAN: She was pretty…from what I can remember...She was a good cook, she used to make us these cakes with jam in the middle…they were shaped like teddy bears (He sat frozen, almost whispering the words) DR MILLER: From what you can remember? So you didn’t spend your whole childhood with her then? (Ryan’s face hardened, he sat up and swallowed) RYAN: No, I went into foster care when I was 10 DR MILLER: Oh, I’m very sorry…what happened? RYAN: I…there was…it’s not relevant, can we move on please? (She looked at the desperation in his eyes) DR MILLER: We’ll come back to that later…What about siblings? Do you have any brothers or sisters? (He launched himself up of the chair sending it flying backwards, anger and hurt on his face. She frowned) RYAN: I need to go… DR MILLER: The sessions not over… RYAN: I’ve got a wedding to go to DR MILLER: Ryan, I really think you should stay…come on, we can have a chat. (Ryan stood for a moment in deep thought before turning and walking out the door. Dr Miller sighed in disappointment) SCENE 8: (Max was in the kitchen pouring a drink when Kayla stepped inside. Max noticed and grinned turning around) MAX: Hey hotstuff, what can I do for you? KAYLA: Where is he? MAX: I don’t know who you’re talking about (He said it sweetly and raised his eyebrows at Kayla. Her face flashed with fury) KAYLA: I know you’ve done something with him…I know you know where he is MAX: errr…wrong KAYLA: Did you tell him? Did you tell him about me and you? MAX: Don’t be ridiculous (He acted bored) KAYLA: Then where is HE? (Suddenly the kitchen door opened and Carl stepped through) CARL: That was the police on the phone KAYLA: What?! CARL: The Indiana State Police, they have Nick…He’s been arrested! END CREDITS |
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| ebard | Aug 11 2014, 05:23 AM Post #2 |
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I liked the scenes with Ryan and the therapist. I also want to know more about his childhood, because there's apparently a story there! |
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