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| EPISODE 6 - 8 (Aug 25th - Aug 27th, 2014) | |
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| DaveBedford | Aug 28 2014, 07:25 AM Post #1 |
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EPISODE 6 Frankie Hubbard returns home after work to see Madison. Madison hugs him as he comes through the door. Frankie tells Madison that they need to talk about something important. "How was work, honey?" asks Madison. "Same as everyday but I did get a strange call from Jake Martin." "How was it strange?" "I wouldn't call it strange as much an interesting. Jake said that a former colleague of his offered me a job but the catch is that it takes me overseas. I don't ruin our new found relationship." "You won't ruin anything because I'll be with you the entire way. I'll join you," said Madison kissing Frankie. "Are you sure? I don't want to pressure you into this decision," said Frankie. "Frankie, I'm sure," said a frank Madison. "I will support you in your decision because I love you." Frankie kisses Madison. "I should call my parents so I can go over and tell them what's going on. We can have a family dinner and you can come to." ~ ~ ~ Cpl Shaw is sitting in his cell when his ex wife Pam shows up with a smile. Raymond is obviously not thrilled to see her. "What the hell are you smiling at?" asked Raymond shows distain towards his ex. "Just that your finally where you belong," said Pam. "You can't hurt me or my son anymore because you'll rot in prison." "Riley is MY son too!" exclaimed Raymond. "You lost that right when you kidnapped him and wanted to change who he was. My son was perfectly fine the way he was," said Pam. "This is your last stand and you had every opportunity to get to know who Riley really was but you blew it. Just so you know, I'm filing for full custody of Riley and the judge will have noice but to grant it since your in jail." "You bitch! You will not keep my son from me!" said a furious Raymond. "You have no say in the matter as the paperwork was already filed," stated Pam. "Goodbye Raymond. Enjoy your life in prison." ~ ~ ~ Greenlee is in her suite at the hotel packing an overnight bag for her trip to find Leo when Kendall pays her a visit.. "We haven't spoken in months and I thought we should clear the air about where things stand for our friendship," explained Kendall. "I will be the first to admit that i've been treating you like a bitch lately and you didn't deserve it. I was taking everything out on you because you were the only there. I want to make amends and say sorry." Kendall hugs her and they sit down. "I'm glad. Our friendship meant everything to me and didn't want to lose it. I actually came to see you about Ryan." "I assume you spoke to Ryan and you came to convince me to take him back." "No, I think that Ryan knows it's over and has decided to leave town," said Kendall. "Ryan had the belief that David was manipulating you by saying Leo is still alive which sounds crazy." "Ryan leaving town has no bearings on my life anymore. I'm done and moving on. Leo being alive sounded crazy to me to but David had a file in his office that confirmed my suspicions." "Wow. That's incredible news. I thought Leo was gone but it's given you another chance to be happy. Is that why your bag is packed?" asked Kendall. "I'm going to find Leo and bring him home. I have 3 addresses of where he is possibly is right now." "Good luck. I hope you find him." "Thank you." ~ ~ ~ "I'm not leaving. I need to talk to you," said Erica. "Make it quick, mom. I'm extremely busy." "This is about Reese. I understand what I did with Reese and trying to get her to leave Pine Valley was wrong but I had the best intentions. I did it because I didn't want you heartbroken when the truth came out. I went the wrong way about it but I was protecting you. Don't tell me you wouldn't do the same thing if this were Miranda. I'm sure you would because you love your daughter like I do. We're parents who would do anything for our children." Erica leaves as Bianca sheds some tears realizing that she may've been too hard on her mom. Bianca tries to go after her but is shocked to see Maggie at her work. Bianca takes Maggie in her office and closes the door. "Hey, Bianca." "This is a surprise. I thought you were in Paris still." "I took an early flight and came to see you." "Why?" asked a puzzled Bianca. "I missed you and I wanted to ask you to marry me because I want to spend my life with you. Ever since we broke up, I knew I wanted this for us," said Maggie with a smile. "I don't know what to say. This is all a big shock to me," said Bianca still reeling from Maggie's proposal. "I understand but I won't wait around forever for you to decide. Either we do this or we part ways for good. I know deep down you still love me. I'll be staying at the Valley Inn waiting to hear from you." ~ ~ ~ EPISODE 7 Frankie Hubbard and Madison are at his parent's home for dinner. Everyone is eating when Frankie decides to tell them the news. "Mom. Dad. I have some news I want to share." "What is it, sweetie?" asked Angie. "Well, I received a call from Jake about a new job opportunity and I decided to accept it." "How is Jake and Amanda?" asks Angie. "Their good. Amanda is pregnant and expecting again." "What's the job?" asked Jesse. "It's Doctors Without Borders. I would be leaving town with Madison to start the job overseas. It was an excellent opportunity I couldn't pass up." "Congratulations, son," said Jesse giving his son a hug. Angie stands up a kisses her son on the cheek. "That's great news. It's a once in a lifetime opportunity that shouldn't be passed up." "I'm glad I didn't." Frankie calls Jake to tell him that he that he accepts the job. Jake says he'll officially start next month. ~ ~ ~ Miguel is lying in his bed trying to decide if he should or shouldn't accept JR's help in retrieving the company. Miguel makes a decision that could impact his life with his father. Miguel calls Adam. "Dad, it's Miguel. Can you meet me? I want to talk about a business idea I had." ~ ~ ~ Bianca is at the Miranda Centre when she calls her sister Kendall. Kendall says she'll be by shortly to talk. Minutes later, Kendall arrives to see her sister. "Hey, what's wrong?" asked Kendall as she notices that Bianca has been crying. "It's nothing really. Me and mom weren't on speaking terms because of what happened earlier but she came by and said some thing that hit home for me that were true. I realized I was too hard and needed to apologize." "That's good at least. Was that why you wanted to talk?" "No. Maggie is home." "Whoa. That's a shocker," said a stunned Kendall. "I thought she was still-" "I did to but she's in Pine Valley. She came back to propose marriage but I couldn't give her an answer. Even after the affair Maggie had with Cecille, I was still drawn to her and wanted to be with her but I was afraid of being hurt again." "If you still love Maggie and have unresolved feelings, I think the answer to your question is simple. You tell Maggie yes because she's the one you love. Saying your afraid to be hurt is an excuse to me. It shouldn't hamper your desire to be with someone you care about." ~ ~ ~ Greenlee arrives at the 1st address to find a damp, and desolate facility. Greenlee searches for clues about Leo and makes an odd discovery. Greenlee finds 2 empty gurneys with IV drips hanging off them and wonders if Leo and Dixie were the patients or if it was someone totally different. Greenlee leaves the facility and drives to the 2nd address. ~ ~ ~ EPISODE 8 "Hello, son," said Adam standing in the doorway. "I'm glad you came. Please take a seat." "What was this business idea that you had?" asked Adam as he pulled up a chair to sit down. "I know your overwhelmed at times with the amount of work you have so I wanted to suggest that I get involved in the family business and run Cortland Electronics if you'll allow it." "I've always wanted another son to follow in my footsteps and your doing it. Will I allow it? Of course. I agree that i'm too busy and having someone else will help lessen the work I have to do." Adam leaves his son to rest when Miguel calls JR. "JR, it's Miguel. If you want the company that our father stole, it's yours to run." ~ ~ ~ Scott is awake and reading a book when his cousin JR and ex Annie finally pay him a visit. "Hey, cousin. How are you feeling?" asked JR. "Like I took a bullet for you," said Scott with a dry laugh. "Did the cops figure out who the shooter was?" "It was Marissa. She escaped prison and was trying to kill Annie so she could be a family with me and AJ. She didn't seem all there. It seemed like she suffered a mental break," explained JR. "I bet. Is that psychotic woman finally back behind bars?" "No. Marissa is dead. We had a struggle over the gun and she was shot and killed," said Annie. "At least she can't bother anyone anymore." ~ ~ ~ Bianca goes to her mother's house. Erica is happy that her daughter came by to see her. "I'm so happy that you decided to come by," said Erica. "I needed to tell you that I was sorry. I passed judgment too quick on you." "Your forgiven, sweetie. It's water under the bridge," said Erica as she hugged her daughter. "You were right. As a mother. I would do anything to protect Miranda. It's in our blood to protect our children. We're the bears trying to nurture our cubs trying to keep them safe. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. It's the nature of the beast." ~ ~ ~ Greenlee arrives at the 2nd facility and the lights are beaming down in the room as she notices 2 gurneys with people lying on them in the middle of the room. Greenlee approaches and makes a shocking discovery that almost leaves her a loss for words. "Oh my god! Th-this isn't possible. How are they still alive?" asked Greenlee as she looked down at Babe Chandler and Stuart Chandler, who were very MUCH alive!! Greenlee calls 911 for an ambulance to come and help transport the patients to Pine Valley Hospital. |
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| Terry | Aug 29 2014, 02:24 AM Post #2 |
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Great episodes |
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| ebard | Aug 31 2014, 02:27 AM Post #3 |
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You were doing so good... Frankie/Madison are a complete WTF story. Makes zero sense and was way too rushed. As was the Maggie/Bianca engagement. They havent talked in YEARS and Maggie proposes within seconds of seeing Bianca? Not that excited for Babe/Stuart either tbh. Because it's been done. I would really like to see you branch on into your own story lines and leave these repeat story lines alone. |
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