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| Episode 1.06; Airdate: 22 January 2015 | |
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| Jacques | Mar 21 2015, 09:21 AM Post #1 |
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Guest Stars Thomas Jane – Troy Matt Bomer – Charl Scene 1 Wayne decides to break the awkward silence. Wayne: Have you told anyone? Bree: About? Wayne: You know about what. Bree: You making out with Kendall’s boyfriend. No I haven’t. Wayne: It better stay that way. Bree: You can stop with the threats. This isn’t my business. All of us have something we want to keep a secret besides it isn’t my place to tell anyone. That is your business. Wayne: Okay. Wayne falls down on the bed. Wayne: This is all such a big mess. Bree: You two in love? Wayne: I don’t know what we are. Zane is the one with the issues. He kicked me out of my room. I was on my way to the admin office to see if there is someone looking for a new roommate. Bree: If you want you can sleep with me. Wayne: Sorry honey I don’t swing that way. Bree: It is not what I meant. My roommate hasn’t been in the room since semester started. I freaked her out. She is staying in another room. Her bed is empty. You can stay there for a while. Just until you guys have figured things out. Wayne: Why are you being so nice to me? Bree: I am not as bad as everyone thinks I am. Just because I look like Dracula’s bride…I know what people say about me… Wayne: Thanks. You mind if I ask a question. Bree: Sure. Wayne: Why the makeover now? Bree: I think it is time to let go of the past. It is a new chapter in my life and there is someone special. Wayne: There is. Now I am curious. Who is he? Bree: Garth Donaldson. Wayne: The Garth from that TV show. Bree: Maybe. Garth: He is hot. You lucky girl. Bree: If not Zane…you will find someone. Wayne: What if I don’t want someone else? Bree: Sometimes we don’t have a choice. Does Zane really deserve you? Look how he has been treating you. He is keeping you a secret and threw you out of the room. What if he never comes out of the closet? You will have been wasting your time. You deserve better than that. Zane may never be ready. Wayne starts to think about what Bree said. Scene 2 Margo is on the phone. Darin is pacing up and down. He gets a bit irritated because Margo is taking long on the phone. She finally hangs up. Margo: If there is a hole I my floor you will be paying for it. Darin: What is happening? Margo: Go back to your apartment. An officer will show up shortly. Darin: To arrest me. Margo: No. He is a good friend who owes me a favor. He is going to take your statement and take it into the station where he will make it appear as if your statement was misplaced. Darin: Will that even work? Margo: It should. Look…you stopped and didn’t see anything. You went to the station to report it. Some idiot misplaced your statement. It isn’t your fault. Darin: I hope it works. Margo: You better get going. Darin: Thanks for your help. Margo: You know it didn’t come free. I washed your back…now it is your turn. Darin nods and leaves. Scene 3 Skye returns home. Lawson is sitting in the corner of the room. Skye: I didn’t think you’d be here. Lawson: I live here Skye. Skye: It is not what I meant. We left things a bit awkward earlier. Lawson: You walked out on me. Skye: You accused me of things. Lawson: It was the truth. You tried to manipulate Garth and Jordan. Skye: it is not a manipulation. I am just trying to fix two friends up. Lawson: You accused me of having feelings for Jordan and then you told Garth not to engage with Bree. Skye: They are not a good fit. Lawson: That is not for you to decide. Garth likes Bree. Skye: That will suit you just fine wouldn’t it. That would leave Jordan open. Lawson: How many times do I have to tell you this? I am not interested in Jordan. Skye: You keep saying that but I can see it on your face. You feel something for her. Lawson: I don’t. If it would make you feel any better Jordan is seeing someone else. Skye: She is? Lawson: Yeah. I need some fresh air. Skye: Don’t leave now. We need to talk this out. Lawson: I said everything. To me this is resolved and I don’t want to talk about it any further. Lawson storms out. Skye shakes her head. Scene 4 Jordan returns. Jordan: I’ve got everything we need. You sure you want to do this Bree. Bree: Yes. I have hidden long enough. Wayne: Enough talking…more doing. So what do we do first. Take off the rings from your face or make-up. Bree: I’ll take off the rings. Bree slowly and carefully removes everything from her face. Wayne: Must say it already looks much better. Can’t wait to see what you actually look like. Jordan starts taking off all the black and white make-up from Bree’s face. Wayne: You actually have a lovely skin tone. Bree: Thanks. Jordan: Now lets start with your hair. Wayne: I am just going to make one phone call. Wayne steps outside. Jordan: Looks like you two are getting along. Bree: He isn’t that bad. We are actually going to be roommates for a while. Jordan: Did he and Zane have a fight or something? Bree: Or something. Can I ask you something? Jordan: Yeah sure. Bree: Do you have a thing for Lawson? Jordan: No but why do you ask? Bree: It is something Garth told me. I was wondering if I should tell you but you are my friend. Jordan: Tell me what. Bree: The night we met Garth…Skye wanted to set you up with him. She hoped that you two would have hit it off. She was jealous of you spending time with Lawson. Jordan: He is helping me with my accent. That is all. Bree: After things didn’t’ work out the way she hoped. She made up stories about Garth towards me and she told Garth to put space between us. Jordan: Why would she do that? Bree: She is still hoping that you and Garth will hit it off. Jordan: So she manipulated you and Garth. Bree: Yes. Jordan: That is unbelievable. I am not interested in Lawson. There is someone else I like. Bree: Ryker. Jordan: Yeah. I would like to see where this goes. Wayne enters. Wayne: I want you all to meet my friend Cathy. She is a hairdresser and has a small salon not too far from here. I thought she might trim all the dead ends. Bree: Hi. Cathy: Hi. You want me to take over. Jordan: Yeah please. You are the professional. Jordan walks up to Wayne. Jordan: That was a nice thing to do. Wayne: It’s the least I can do. Jordan puts her arm around his waist. Scene 5 Lawson arrives at Blue Door. He takes a seat at the bar. He orders a beer. About two stools away Ryker is sitting. Lawson: Perfect. Ryker: Did you say something? Lawson: You’re Jordan’s friend. Ryker: Yes and you are her speech coach. Lawson: Jip. Ryker: Ryker. Lawson: Lawson. Ryker: So you are a professor at UCLA. Lawson: Not actually. I help out sometimes. My mother is. You should have a class with her…Margo. Ryker: She’s your mother. Lawson nods. Lawson: So you and Jordan… Ryker: She is amazing. He is the whole package. She is sweet, caring, beautiful and she makes me laugh. Lawson: It sounds serious. Ryker: At the moment we are just getting to know each other. Hopefully this will become more. That reminds me…I have to text her to set our date tonight. Ryker takes out his phone. He text Jordan. He tells her the time and place. In a couple of seconds she text back that she can’t wait. Ryker: I should get going. It was nice meeting you. Ryker shakes Lawson’s hand and leaves. Lawson orders another drink. Scene 6 Jordan smiles and puts her phone away. Wayne: That smile can only mean one thing…a guy. Jordan gives a smile. Bree gets off the chair. Bree: What do you guys think? Jordan: WOW! You look amazing. Wayne: You look amazing. You are going to be the reason a couple of bitches will get their panties in a knot. Bree: Right now I just care to impress one guy. Jordan: Impress you will. Now we just need to get you something to where. Jordan opens her closet. Jordan: This should do. Jordan hands her a navy blue dress. Bree: You sure. Jordan: Yes. Listen I need to run but be free to get ready for your date here. Wayne: I’ll help you. Bree gives Jordan a hug. Jordan leaves the room. Her facial expression gets serious. Jordan: Time to get a few things straight Skye. Jordan leaves. Scene 7 Garth arrives at Bree’s room. He is holding a bunch of roses in his one hand. He knocks on the door with the other. Bree opens the door. Garth: Hi. I am looking for Bree. Is she here? Bree: He is. Bree gives a smile. Garth’s jaw drops when he realizes that it is Bree standing in front of him. Garth: Oh…Oh…WOW! You look absolutely breathtaking. Bree: Thank you. So you like this look. Garth: I never had a problem with how you look before but if this makes YOU happy then I am happy. Bree: It does. No more hiding behind weird make-up and piercing. Garth: I most certainly have the most beautiful date. Bree smiles. Bree: Is that for me. Garth: Oh…yes. He hands her the roses. Bree: It is beautiful. She puts it on the bed. Garth: The limo waits. Bree: You got us a limo. Garth: When I do a date I do it properly. Bree hooks in her arm into Garth’s. They arrive at the limo. The driver opens the door. They get in. Garth: There is just one thing I need to get off my chest. Garth kisses Bree. Scene 8 Wayne enters Zane’s room. Wayne: Sorry…I forgot some notes of one of my classes. I will be out of your hair soon. Zane: It is fine. A detective knocks. Zane gets up from his bed. Zane: Any news. Detective: In fact we do. We found the person who hit you. Zane: You did. Wayne: I hope he is behind bars. Detective: It is not so open and shut. Wayne: Why not? Detective: One of the rookies’s made a mistake. Zane: What kind of mistake? Detective: The person that hit you did actually come to the station to report the accident but his statement was misfiled. Zane: What is going to happen now? Detective: He did report the accident and he did thought he hit an animal. We did investigate and everything he says appears to be true. Wayne: So this is it. This guy gets away with almost killing someone. Detective: It was an unfortunate accident but if you want to press charges you can but it isn’t going to be easy. You were wearing dark clothes, which was hard to see. Like I said if you get a good lawyer you can. Zane: No. I want to drop it. Close the file. Wayne: You are not serious. Detective: If you are absolutely sure. Zane: Yes. Wayne: Can you tell us who it was? Zane: I don’t want to know. Wayne: What? Zane: Thank you detective for everything. The detective leaves. Wayne: Zane come on. You can’t let this go. Zane: Did you find your notes? Wayne: Yeah. Zane: Then leave. Wayne: Zane… Zane: LEAVE! Wayne shakes his head and leaves. Scene 9 Someone is knocking hard on the door and constantly. Skye: I am coming! Skye opens the door. Jordan storms in. Skye: I am not in the mood. Jordan: look at my face Skye. Does it look like I am in the mood but no you gave me no choice. Skye: What are you rambling on about? Jordan: I am sick and tired of hearing that I am interested in Lawson. I am not. Skye: Actions speaks louder than words. Jordan: Lawson is helping me getting my accent right. That is it. Skye: You protest a bit too much. Jordan: I am pissed because you are trying to get in between two of my friends. Skye: You mean weirdo and Garth. That won’t last. Jordan: They have a good chance without interfering. If you are insecure about your relationship that is your problem. Skye: You should be nicer to me. I do have influence in Hollywood. I could end your career before it even started. Jordan: The only one that can end my career is me. You may think that you are this big shot actress. You made one good movie that got you onto the TV show. If I recall you made some really bad career choices. For a few years your career was non-existent. You could be glad you got that movie because that was your only saving grace so don’t tell me you can end my career. I doubt if you have really all these influences. Skye: You want to test me and find out. Jordan: Stay the hell away from me and if you try to put your nose in my business you will be sorry. Jordan storms out. She literally bumps into Lawson outside the building. Lawson: Wow! Who made you angry? Jordan: Not now Lawson. He grabs her by the arm. Lawson: Jordan what is going on? Jordan: Why don’t you ask your girlfriend? Lawson: I am asking you. Jordan: Skye is messing with my life and my friends. I am not going to allow it. Lawson: You found out about her manipulating Garth and Bree. Jordan: You knew. Lawson: I found out not too long ago. Jordan: Why didn’t you tell me you were dating a mental case. Lawson: Skye can sometimes do things before she thinks. Jordan: I don’t need this. All I wanted is to come to LA, study and get my career off the ground. I was in a relationship before coming here. I am clearly not ready for anything. All I want to do is focus on my life. I don’t need all of this bull. Lawson: Maybe we can go somewhere and talk. Jordan: No. The further we stay away from each other…the better. Lawson: You know that is not possible. I am your couch. Jordan: Not anymore. I will get someone else. Jordan walks away. Scene 10 Bree and Garth arrives at his apartment. Bree: Thank you for a lovely evening. I wish this night would never end. Garth: It shouldn’t have to. We can talk and enjoy each other’s company. Bree: I’d like that. Garth: I was wondering. Would you be interested in visiting the studio tomorrow? Bree: You mean be on the set of Seventh Avenue. Garth: Yeah. You can spend the whole day with me. It will be like a personal tour. You can see how things are done from start to finish and you can maybe help me go through my lines. Bree: That will be amazing but… Garth: But what? Bree: I don’t know if I have the energy to run into Skye. Garth: Skye wont be a problem and if she even looks at you the wrong way…she will have to do with me. Bree: Then…I would love spending a day with you on set. Garth: How about tomorrow. Bree: I have classes tomorrow but I guess one day missing them won’t be too much of a big deal. Garth: Great. The show got behind in taping Skye and my scenes. I had that food poisoning and Skye well is being Skye. Apparently the network wants to air this episode Tuesday night. We thought we had a few more weeks before this episode was to air but they want fewer breaks in between this season. Luckily the episode is almost done except for our scenes. I just hope that Skye puts her Diva in the closet for the day. Bree: I am sure everything will be okay. Garth: Now that I know you will be on the set everything will be. Bree: It is getting late. I should get home. Garth: Why don’t you spend the night? Bree: I am not ready to jump into bed with you. Garth: It is not what I meant. I would just like to fall asleep with you next by my side and wake up with you. Nothing more. Bree: I can’t sleep in this dress. Garth: I have a shirt you can wear. Bree: Okay. Garth gets up to go and fetch the shirt. For the first time Bree feels as if she can let go of the past and every bad thing that happened to her. She felt safe with Garth. Scene 11 Lawson enters the apartment. Skye is standing with her hands crossed. She looks pissed. Skye: Your girlfriend was just here. Lawson: She is not my girlfriend. Skye: Not yet. Lawson: Your insecurities are not my problem. Skye: Tell me you feel nothing for her and I will let it go. Lawson shakes his head. Lawson: This is unbelievable. How many times do I have to say that there is nothing between Jordan and me. Skye: You can say it until you are blue in the face because it is written all over you Lawson. Lawson: I think I am going to crash at my mom’s place. Skye: Running away is always the answer. I should know. You have been running for a long time. You can’t face the facts about why you are afraid of appearing in front of a camera. Lawson: This has nothing to do with that and you bringing that up…it is uncalled for. Skye: Maybe you just hate the truth. Lawson: Maybe I should go before things are said that can never be taken back. Lawson storms out. Scene 12 PLAY SONG TILL END OF SCENE The scene fades into Garth’s apartment. Garth is lying on the bed. One arm under his head. Bree comes out of the bathroom wearing one of Garth’s shirts. He smiles at her as she walks to the bed. They start to kiss. The scene fades to Skye. Skye is curled up on the couch. There is an empty bottle of vodka lying on the floor. The scene cuts to Lawson standing at the door of Margo’s apartment. Margo is surprised to see him. She lets him in and closes the door behind him. The scene cuts to Darin. Darin pulls over his car on the spot he hit Zane. He gets flashbacks of it. The scene cuts to Wayne. Wayne is alone on the stage at Troy’s studio. Wayne starts to dance. Troy is standing at the back watching Wayne dance. Wayne doesn’t notice Troy. The scene fades to Jordan. She stops in front of the window of Blue Door. She sees Ryker sitting at one of the tables waiting for her. He is looking on his watch. He then takes out his phone. After a few seconds Jordan’s phone starts to buzz. Ryker’s name appears on screen. Jordan declines the call. She walks away. The scene cuts back to Bree and Garth. Bree pulls away from the kiss. She turns around. Her back facing Garth. Garth puts his arm around her and pulls her closer to his body. Bree gives a satisfying smile. They both closes their eyes and falls asleep. The scene cuts to Erin and Charl making love. The scene cuts to Jordan. She is sitting on a park bench. She takes out her phone. She goes into her address book. She scrolls down to Kyle's name. She puts her finger on "Call" but is hesitating if she should. She thinks that maybe it isn't a good idea rehashing the past but there is no one else knowing her as well as Kyle did. The scene fades to an unknown location. A man's hand is seen holding purple women's panties. He walks to a picture frame and hangs the panties on one of the sides of the frame. The photo inside the frame is revealed. It is Bree. The scene cuts to Zane lying on his bed. He rehashes the moment he got hit by the car. He then thinks back moments before he got hit. Zane is walking down the road when he hears a car. he turns his head and sees car lights heading his way. Tears are streaming down his face. Zane steps in front of the car on purpose thus revealing that Zane was in fact trying to commit suicide by walking in front of the car. Edited by Jacques, Mar 21 2015, 09:22 AM.
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| ebard | Mar 21 2015, 01:31 PM Post #2 |
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Loved the ending! Sweetwaters shout out with Jordan almost calling Kyle! Who is stalking Bree?! Loving the Zane/Wayne story! |
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