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#1010 - 28 July 2014
Topic Started: Nov 7 2015, 07:31 AM (165 Views)
Jacques
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Scene 1

April enters Jake’s office.

April: I brought some food. We can eat while working.
Jake: Thanks.

April hands him a bottle of water. He opens it and takes a sip. She puts hers on the table.

April: Have you gotten through to Stacy?
Jake: No. I will try again later.
April: I just have to go to my office quickly to go pick up some files. I’ll be back in a sec.
Jake: I need to go to the men’s room before we start working.

Both of them leaves the office. The elevator door opens. Donna steps out. She heads towards jake’s office. The door is open and there is no one. She sees the food.

Donna: Perfect.

Donna fiddles in her bag. She takes out two capsules. She thinks for a moment and then takes four more out. She opens Jake’s water. She breaks open three capsules and pours the powder into his water. She does the same to Aprils. She leaves just in time as April returns. April takes a sip of her water. Jake returns.

Jake: Guess we have to start getting some work done. Really don’t want to be here too late.
April: Of course.

Donna goes down to the basement of the building. She looks around for a bit. She smirks when she found what she was looking for. She messes around with the air conditioning.

Donna: Things are about to get very hot.

Donna leaves.

Scene 2

A man sneaks onto the Creed property. He makes his way to the cars. He kneels down at Spencer’s and slips underneath it. The man cuts the break wire. The man leaves. He rushes to his van. He gets in. He makes a call.

Man: It’s done.

The man hangs up. The person on the other side is Eve.

Scene 3

Ross and Tim arrives back at the mansion.

Ross: You haven’t said a word since we left the center. What do you think?

Tim burst out in tears.

Tim: My life is really spiraling out of control isn’t it.
Ross: It is why you need help. Let me help you.
Tim: I am just in so much pain Ross. I need to stay high because it is the only time I don’t feel pain.
Ross: Joe was a good man. He died way too early but do you think he would have enjoyed seeing you like this.
Tim: No.
Ross: Then take the first step. I can’t help you if you don’t want it.
Tim: I want it.
Ross: Okay. You go pack and I will take you back to rehab.
Tim: Thank you for not giving up on me.

Ross gives a smile. Tim goes upstairs. Sandra comes down.

Sandra: I thought I heard voices.

The doorbell rings. Ross answers the door. FBI agents storms in.

Ross: What the hell is going on?

FBI: We are looking for Ross Creed.
Ross: I am Ross.

Another agent pushes Ross against the wall. He is cuffed.

Sandra: What is going on here?

Another agent asks where his room is.

Sandra: I am not saying anything without a warrant.
Ross: I've got nothing to hide. Upstairs. Third door on your right.

One of the agents rushes upstairs. After a couple of minutes he returns with Ross's laptop.

Agent: Nothing to hide. Then what is this.

The agent turns the laptop around to let Ross see. It is child pornography.

Ross: That is a mistake.
Agent: Come on.

The agent pushes Ross outside.

Sandra: I will call a lawyer and your father.

Sandra rushes to her phone. She calls a lawyer. Afterwards she tries to call Tom but only gets voicemail. Sandra leaves a message and storms out of the mansion.

Scene 4

Stacy reads the texts Jake has been sending her.

Stacy: (to herself) Okay Stacy. Stop acting like a bitch. Jake loves you and you should have told him that you wanted to work at Creed. You should stop being paranoid. Jake and April has to work together. There is no way he will cheat on you with her. For crying out loud. She stole our child. You should appreciate the wonderful husband you have. I should go to Creed and apologize.

Stacy gets into her car.

Scene 5

Nikki arrives at Roman's place. Just before she enters her phone rings. She sees a name on her screen that she hasn't seen in a long time. She answers.

Nikki: Lakin...
Lakin: Hey Nikki. I know I am the last person you wanted to talk to but I had no choice.
Nikki: What is going on?
Lakin: Have you heard from Scott?
Nikki: No. I haven't spoken to Scott in weeks.
Lakin: I am getting worried. I spoke to Langston and she hasn't seen or heard from him either. Things between us has been a bit shaky but for him to just disappear like that. You know he did mention that he wanted to go visit Kyleigh. I just thought he went.
Nikki: I am sorry. He isn't here.
Lakin: If he does show up can you please tell him to call me.
Nikki: I will.

Lakin hangs up. Nikki gives a sigh and enters the apartment.

Nikki: Roman!

There is no one. Nikki finds it strange because Roman said he was at the apartment.

Nikki: Maybe I misunderstood.

Nikki is about to call Roman when someone grabs her from behind. They put a cloth over her nose. In seconds Nikki passes out.

Scene 6

The elevator door of Creed opens. Stacy steps out.

Stacy: My gosh. It is hot in here. The AC must not be working.

Stacy arrives at Jake's office. She pushes the door open and is stunned to find April and Jake having sex on his desk.

Scene 7

Quinn arrives at the cottage. Spencer and Paige is in the bedroom making love. Quinn is smiling when she enters the cottage. She hears noises coming from the bedroom. She pushes the door open.

Quinn: What the hell?

Spencer and Paige is inn total shock. They grab the sheet to cover themselves.

Spencer: Quinn!
Quinn: You lying son of a bitch.

Spencer jumps out of bed. He grabs his shorts and puts it on. Quinn rushes to the living room.

Spencer: You have to hear me out.

Quinn slaps him just as he finishes the sentence.

Spencer: I thought it was over between us.
Quinn: So you jumped into bed with the first whore you find.
Spencer: She isn't a whore.
Quinn: What do you call a slut that sleeps with a married man.
Spencer: You pushed me away.
Quinn: Don't make this my fault.
Spencer: It kind of is. I went to Switzerland and you didn't even want to see me.
Quinn: I felt like a freak. I hate you to see me like that.
Spencer: It is not an excuse. I love you. I don't care what your face looked like.
Quinn: I wanted to surprise you but guess I was the one getting the surprise.
Spencer: We can talk like adults.
Quinn: Right now I can't stand to look at you.

Quinn grabs Spencer's car keys on the table.
Spencer: Quinn wait.

Spencer runs after Quinn. She gets into the car and drives off. Spencer yells her name. Paige goes outside.

Paige: I am so sorry.
Spencer: It isn't just your fault. I knew what I was doing.

Quinn cries as she starts going faster. Se realizes how fast she is going. She puts her foot on the breaks but there is no breaks.

Quinn: What the hell?

A turn is coming. Quinn looses control of the car. It flips.

Scene 8

Tom's car is shown in a bad part of town. Tom passed out in his car. He wakes up. He is a bit disoriented as he has no clue where he is. There is a knock on the car window. Tom looks over. He doesn't see the person's face only the torso part. It looks like a homeless person. The person knocks again. Tom opens the window. The homeless person lower himself to look at Tom face to face.

Man: Do you have change to spare?

The homeless man is none other than Michael Creed.

Scene 9

Brandt and Amanda is at Lawries. The waitress has just taken their order. Donna stops her car on the opposite of the street. Amanda and Brandt can be seen. Donna grabs the brown bag on the passenger's seat.

Donna: By now Ross must be in jail, Jake and April in a steamy affair, Tom loosing his mind, Nikki back where she belongs and now it is time to take care of missy Amanda.

Donna takes out a wig. She puts it on. She is also wearing different clothes than before. Donna gets out of her car.

Donna: Show time.

Donna enters the restaurant.

Brandt: You must be relieved that the doctor said the baby will be arriving in the next couple of days.
Amanda: I can't tell you how much I am looking forward to that baby coming out of me. It has been hard especially going to the bathroom every other second which if I don't go right now...
Brandt: Of course.
Amanda: I am not looking forward to those stairs to the bathroom.
Brandt: I am sorry about that. I didn't realize that the bottom bathrooms are out of order because they are renovating them.
Amanda: It is fine. A couple of stairs won't kill me...I hope.
Brandt: I am sure the place next door won't mind if you use...
Amanda: I won't make it. It is fine.

Amanda gets up. As she is heading for the stairs she sees ''Eve" going up the stairs.

Amanda: Oh great. This stalking should end. It is time she is put into place once and for all.

Amanda starts going up the stairs. Just as she gets at the top Donna disguised as ever comes around the corner. Everything happens so fast. Donna pushes Amanda. Amanda screams as she falls down the stairs.

Scene 10

Nikki wakes up on the floor. It takes her a couple of minutes to get focus back. The Korean man is sitting on a chair in front of her.

Man: About time Princess.

Nikki looks at the man in shock as she realizes who he is.

Man: You do remember me.

Nikki can't get over the shock.

Man: You really think you can escape my prison and get away with it.

Nikki gets a flashback to when April planted drugs in Nikki's luggage. Nikki was arrested and ended up in a Korean prison where later Scott, Jake, Tom and Stacy broke her out of. The flashback ends.

Man: I was running that prison perfectly until you destroyed everything. I was fired. My own people looked at me as a criminal.

Nikki: What happened in that prison was criminal.
Man: It was justice. I made a promise that I will hunt you down. I did with a little help.
Nikki: Where is Roman? Do you have Roman?
Man: By now the fishes are probably feasting on his corpse.
Nikki: (tears are running down her cheeks) No.

The man grabs Nikki. He drags her to another room. He throws her on the ground. Nikki is shocked when she sees Scott chained to the wall badly beaten. She wants to go to him but the man pulls her back.

Man: Don't you just love reunions...just a shame this one is going to be short.
Nikki: What do you want?
Man: I am glad that you asked.

The man takes out a gun and hands it to her. Nikki points it at him.

Man: Don't get ideas. I have eyes on your beautiful daughter. If my people don't hear from me in five minutes they have orders to take her, have some fun with her and then slice her neck like hot butter.
Nikki: Why give me the gun?
Man: Kill Scott.
Nikki: What?
Man: Kill him or your daughter goes bye-bye.
Nikki: I can't.
Scott: Do it Nikki...for Kyleigh.
Nikki: I can't.

The man takes out his phone. He is ready to dial a number.

Man: Once I call there will be no turning back and your daugterwill pay for her parent's sins. Now do it.

Tears are streaming down Nikki's cheeks.

Nikki: I am so sorry.

Nikki points the gun at Scott. She pulls the trigger.

The scene goes black and cuts to promo...

Announcer: This January Temptation returns to its full soapy glory with five days a week...

faces of the cast flashes on screen.

Announcer: Kids really grow up fast...

There is a shot of a teenage Storm, Cody and Kyleigh.

Announcer: and these teens come with a lot of drama.

Storm: (to Stacy) You are a hypocrite. I wish April was my mother.

Stacy slaps Storm.

The scene cuts to Ross behind bars. Cody visits him.

Cody: You have no idea what I am dealing with. My father is gay and in prison for child porn. The kids at school are having a field day with me.

The scene cuts to Kyleigh. Kyleigh is holding a bloody knife.

Kyleigh: (Crying) What have you done?

Announcer: Get ready for some returns...

Dylan, Owen and Drew is shown.

Announcer: and in the first five seconds one of them will die...

Scott, Amanda and Quinn's faces flashes on screen and then followed by the rest of the cast.

Announcer: Temptation returns this January. Get Tempted.

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Terry
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Wow I mean I definitely can't believe this this is definitely or should I say probably the best Temptation episode I've read in quite a long time no seriously

I have to wonder why Donna is going out of her way to destroy the Creed family like what did they ever do to her? Why is she going after all of them one by one? I mean it is like she wants to destroy the whole lot of them out of whatever revenge that she thinks she is entitled to but whatever her reasons or motives are I just hope we get an indication

Stacy walking in on Jake and April, I mean no doubt Donna set that up she drugged the both of them and not to mention she messed with the AC too so that way the 2 of them would go at it and for Stacy to have to witness that I can only imagine what she will do now?

Ross being arrested for child porn all Donna's doing and now that he has been arrested for it he is no doubt being set up but at the same time the evidence is right there I mean he looks guilty as hell and even with a good lawyer he doesn't have a prayer

Quinn walking out on Spencer after she walked in on her husband in bed with Paige and then her getting in the car speeding like that and the car flipping crashing like that I wonder if Quinn is all right? I hope Quinn is not dead and if she is alive I can only imagine what kind of shape she'll be in? Quinn I can see her being missing in the sense that she ends up presumed dead or Quinn ends up in a coma

Michael is alive, Spencer's father Tom's son is alive and he is the homeless man I wonder where has Michael been all this time? And for Michael to be reunited with his father I wonder what Michael plans on doing? Or better yet I wonder what Tom plans on doing?

Amanda being pushed down the stairs by Donna I mean Amanda no doubt she has lost her baby
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